for How to Love a Guy in 10 Days9/7/2007 c6 brucas4evaq
pklease update !@!
i love it !
soon please update soon
pklease update !@!
i love it !
soon please update soon
9/7/2007 c6 ILoveYouTooPrettyGirl
AMAZING. I loved it and cannot wait to see what happens during day two of BRUCAS. I also think there should be Naley... Maybe you could bring them in once Brooke and Lucas have known eachother for a couple of days or so. GREAT JOB!
AMAZING. I loved it and cannot wait to see what happens during day two of BRUCAS. I also think there should be Naley... Maybe you could bring them in once Brooke and Lucas have known eachother for a couple of days or so. GREAT JOB!
49/7/2007 c6 bornagainbrucasfan
awesome chapter, loved the instant brucas attraction and chemistry they share.
update soon cant wait for day 2
awesome chapter, loved the instant brucas attraction and chemistry they share.
update soon cant wait for day 2
9/7/2007 c6 INACTIVEACCOUNT243095
So I liked this chapter as well. My only problem is their preconcived notions of eachother are baesed off nothing more than their jobs-and I feel like we need more than that, to believe, you know?
If Lucas saw Brooke constantly mingling with other men, or heard form his sister or mother that the tabloids counstantlyu bashed her-that'd justify his preconceive notion-just as the tabloids questioning Lucas' sexuality, or him being a recluse or a play boy, ahving women dangle off him, or giving off the appearance of being rude to a waitress or whatever- would give Broke the reason to believe in her preconceived notions of him.
Anyway, my point is we need more than an occupation to believe that.
Everything else is great so far, really. I just hope this isn't too sappy romantically sweet. I like just a tad bit of grit in my stories!
So I liked this chapter as well. My only problem is their preconcived notions of eachother are baesed off nothing more than their jobs-and I feel like we need more than that, to believe, you know?
If Lucas saw Brooke constantly mingling with other men, or heard form his sister or mother that the tabloids counstantlyu bashed her-that'd justify his preconceive notion-just as the tabloids questioning Lucas' sexuality, or him being a recluse or a play boy, ahving women dangle off him, or giving off the appearance of being rude to a waitress or whatever- would give Broke the reason to believe in her preconceived notions of him.
Anyway, my point is we need more than an occupation to believe that.
Everything else is great so far, really. I just hope this isn't too sappy romantically sweet. I like just a tad bit of grit in my stories!
9/7/2007 c5 INACTIVEACCOUNT243095
So I think you could've tightening this up and done all of these five chapters in three, but now that we are here at the main plot point, i'm totally with you. at least for now!
So I think you could've tightening this up and done all of these five chapters in three, but now that we are here at the main plot point, i'm totally with you. at least for now!
9/7/2007 c6 Jess
aw i love it! the bl scenes are so cute! cant wait to see what happens on day 2! up date asap!
aw i love it! the bl scenes are so cute! cant wait to see what happens on day 2! up date asap!
9/7/2007 c6 triiish 3
aw. cool! UD SOON!. its soo fate!
aw. cool! UD SOON!. its soo fate!
9/6/2007 c6 daisygirl24
omg this chap was great. it was full of surprises, romance and passion. loved it! i cannot wait til the next meeting. as for the naley meeting...you could have brooke and haley at lunch or a function or something and it happen to be the same place as the boys...or you could have lucas and nathan going to a funraiser and lucas takes brooke. nathan's date cancels at the last minute and brooke sets him up w/ haley (maybe after she couldn't get in touch w/ peyton or peyton declined or maybe brooke felt haley needed a real date?) maybe this helps. not really a story teller, just like to read them. lol. ok ud soon. (i can't wait for the ud on "that fateful night" either!)
omg this chap was great. it was full of surprises, romance and passion. loved it! i cannot wait til the next meeting. as for the naley meeting...you could have brooke and haley at lunch or a function or something and it happen to be the same place as the boys...or you could have lucas and nathan going to a funraiser and lucas takes brooke. nathan's date cancels at the last minute and brooke sets him up w/ haley (maybe after she couldn't get in touch w/ peyton or peyton declined or maybe brooke felt haley needed a real date?) maybe this helps. not really a story teller, just like to read them. lol. ok ud soon. (i can't wait for the ud on "that fateful night" either!)
9/6/2007 c6 chanda
Nice chapter. I loved the spontaneous kiss... can't wait for them to meet again. UD soon
Nice chapter. I loved the spontaneous kiss... can't wait for them to meet again. UD soon