5/31/2013 c1 mikasakuralover1901
omg that's tooooooooooooo sad he blamed himself awwww and how he broke up with her
omg that's tooooooooooooo sad he blamed himself awwww and how he broke up with her
12/30/2009 c1 4c.s.c.l o4
uwah... TT ^ TT
it's like the vid i watched before..
the story is just like it..
demo.
NiiCE! :D
uwah... TT ^ TT
it's like the vid i watched before..
the story is just like it..
demo.
NiiCE! :D
12/22/2009 c1 11Blushing Nezumi
I know this music video!
Because I'm a girl by Kiss, right?
It made me shed a tear. TT.TT
Wa. xD
I know this music video!
Because I'm a girl by Kiss, right?
It made me shed a tear. TT.TT
Wa. xD
6/24/2009 c1 8Euri Scribbles
hehehe finally finished reading it! How could it be so sad? But it's great anyways! Honestly! Though there are a few grammatical errors, it's pretty normal. Everybody makes mistakes. hehehe good story, good idea. Just as I thought, you're an awesome writer, and a very promising one! ^^ hope to see more of your stories!
Ja!
Lovelots,
-Eurice-
hehehe finally finished reading it! How could it be so sad? But it's great anyways! Honestly! Though there are a few grammatical errors, it's pretty normal. Everybody makes mistakes. hehehe good story, good idea. Just as I thought, you're an awesome writer, and a very promising one! ^^ hope to see more of your stories!
Ja!
Lovelots,
-Eurice-
5/10/2009 c1 6Uncoloured186
Again, it's really confusing. Maybe because you didn't give any indication about the location and the time. And I don't see any connection between this story and your title. I hope I didn't hurt you with my review. No offense, really.
Again, it's really confusing. Maybe because you didn't give any indication about the location and the time. And I don't see any connection between this story and your title. I hope I didn't hurt you with my review. No offense, really.
5/9/2009 c1 WickedEgg
Geeze, thats really sad! I think this stories a bite long but the ending was worth reading the whole thing. I think you over all wrote this story well. :)
Geeze, thats really sad! I think this stories a bite long but the ending was worth reading the whole thing. I think you over all wrote this story well. :)
5/1/2009 c1 5LuckyStarWitch
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! This story was inspired by a song right? I remembered watching a MV where that guy that was singing had a girlfriend...and he was a pfotographer...and then his gf went to mess about with his things ...(or so I think...)...then I think she was trying to reach up to get somthing on a shelf and then that liquid photographers used spilt down and she became blind...next thing I know the man was on a bike...the memory is a bit fuzzy cus I watched it LONG time ago...was it a Chinese song?...I forgot...I think it might be Michael Guang...but I'm not sure...hm...well...whatever...the story was really touching really...-cries-...so...did natsume...umm...kick the bucket?
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! This story was inspired by a song right? I remembered watching a MV where that guy that was singing had a girlfriend...and he was a pfotographer...and then his gf went to mess about with his things ...(or so I think...)...then I think she was trying to reach up to get somthing on a shelf and then that liquid photographers used spilt down and she became blind...next thing I know the man was on a bike...the memory is a bit fuzzy cus I watched it LONG time ago...was it a Chinese song?...I forgot...I think it might be Michael Guang...but I'm not sure...hm...well...whatever...the story was really touching really...-cries-...so...did natsume...umm...kick the bucket?
9/30/2008 c1 2Whatever07
wah...
(holding a hanky and beside me a bucket)
that was a nice one
I love it eventhough it
does not have a happily ever after ending...
that makes it unique...
wah...
(holding a hanky and beside me a bucket)
that was a nice one
I love it eventhough it
does not have a happily ever after ending...
that makes it unique...
8/9/2008 c1 AnneM.23
Huhuhuu...great story.I nearly cried after i read the story!You really know how to touch people's hearts with your story!
But it's beautiful...one of the best stories i've read...Kawaii!
Huhuhuu...great story.I nearly cried after i read the story!You really know how to touch people's hearts with your story!
But it's beautiful...one of the best stories i've read...Kawaii!
7/26/2008 c1 3lizzilian
THIS IS THE FIRST FANFIC THAT I EVER READ IN MY WHOLE LIFE U KNOW? I CRIED AT THIS FIC! THAT'S WHY I GOT MY INSPIRATION TO READ MORE FICS! I'M REALLY GRATEFUL! THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
THIS IS THE FIRST FANFIC THAT I EVER READ IN MY WHOLE LIFE U KNOW? I CRIED AT THIS FIC! THAT'S WHY I GOT MY INSPIRATION TO READ MORE FICS! I'M REALLY GRATEFUL! THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
7/19/2008 c1 7Blue-Winged-Wind
So sad... For someone to give up such a precious thing such as their freedom to see... It must've really meant love... It was very sweet... I hope someone in real life could really do it... I hope the people these days are more in action than in words... I believe in the saying that actions speaks louder than words. Natsume was so nice to Mikan... That's what you call real love. I almost cried you know, I'm not really good in reading tragic stories, but this one is nice. ^^
So sad... For someone to give up such a precious thing such as their freedom to see... It must've really meant love... It was very sweet... I hope someone in real life could really do it... I hope the people these days are more in action than in words... I believe in the saying that actions speaks louder than words. Natsume was so nice to Mikan... That's what you call real love. I almost cried you know, I'm not really good in reading tragic stories, but this one is nice. ^^
7/1/2008 c1 11incompetent dabbler
Oh now that was sad! It reminds me of this chinese movie that I watched. It was about this girl who had this disese. She was in love with her best friend when they were kids. He had to move somewhere, cause his father is filthy rich. She lives with her step mother, step brother (Who's in love with her), step sister, and her father moves somewhere else. At the airport, they say they love each other and that they'd see each other again. The step sister was in love with her friend. Years later, they see each other and the girl runs to him but when she crosses the street, she gets hit by a car, the step sisters car. Then this whole drama occurs when she doesn't remember anyone but her family and the boy is sad cause she doesn't remember. After that, her disese transferrs to her brain and she might die. Her step brother made a sacrifice and killed himself so he could give her his eyes from surgery. She doesn't know that her step brother killed himself cause he wrote a letter before he died and took a picture with a girl. In the letter he said that he was happy with his girlfriend. Later she gets married with her friend and finds out about her brother. Sadly, she dies in the end while being on the beach and being held by her husband/friend. At the ending, her friend is playing a piano in the beach and he's crying remembering all that's happened. It's really sad and I cried a million times. Sorry to have to make you read this! (_
Oh now that was sad! It reminds me of this chinese movie that I watched. It was about this girl who had this disese. She was in love with her best friend when they were kids. He had to move somewhere, cause his father is filthy rich. She lives with her step mother, step brother (Who's in love with her), step sister, and her father moves somewhere else. At the airport, they say they love each other and that they'd see each other again. The step sister was in love with her friend. Years later, they see each other and the girl runs to him but when she crosses the street, she gets hit by a car, the step sisters car. Then this whole drama occurs when she doesn't remember anyone but her family and the boy is sad cause she doesn't remember. After that, her disese transferrs to her brain and she might die. Her step brother made a sacrifice and killed himself so he could give her his eyes from surgery. She doesn't know that her step brother killed himself cause he wrote a letter before he died and took a picture with a girl. In the letter he said that he was happy with his girlfriend. Later she gets married with her friend and finds out about her brother. Sadly, she dies in the end while being on the beach and being held by her husband/friend. At the ending, her friend is playing a piano in the beach and he's crying remembering all that's happened. It's really sad and I cried a million times. Sorry to have to make you read this! (_
5/28/2008 c1 19Funpen
you're mean... making others cry...tsktsktsk..
i love tragic stories. :))
hahahah! well.. this is a tragic story so...i labhidabhit! lol
i hope we could be friends... please make another tragic story._
you're mean... making others cry...tsktsktsk..
i love tragic stories. :))
hahahah! well.. this is a tragic story so...i labhidabhit! lol
i hope we could be friends... please make another tragic story._
4/21/2008 c1 yingxiaolangfa
This story is somewhat familiar to me... I think I've read one just like this... but somehow it's better... sorry sa straightforwardness... I think it was a Card Captor Sakura... It was "sensitive eyes".. i think...
The last parts were vague but you ended it well naman! so nice job!
^_^
This story is somewhat familiar to me... I think I've read one just like this... but somehow it's better... sorry sa straightforwardness... I think it was a Card Captor Sakura... It was "sensitive eyes".. i think...
The last parts were vague but you ended it well naman! so nice job!
^_^