for A New Star10/17 c1 Terra K McKinnon
yay ! another PERN story from you. I am pleased, and smiling happily.
yay ! another PERN story from you. I am pleased, and smiling happily.
1/19/2021 c23 Wodokeka
I LOVED your story. It has a great theme, characters, plot, suspense, and ending. Thank you again for writing it. I'll check out your novel also and have put you on my favorite authors in case you write about Arryn again. Wodokeka (that means skillful artist in Campfire Girls' terms) LOL
I LOVED your story. It has a great theme, characters, plot, suspense, and ending. Thank you again for writing it. I'll check out your novel also and have put you on my favorite authors in case you write about Arryn again. Wodokeka (that means skillful artist in Campfire Girls' terms) LOL
1/17/2021 c13 Wodokeka
I know you probably don't want to fix this at this late date, but it was hard to follow the mental communications without the italics. Otherwise very good story so far. I'm loving it.
I know you probably don't want to fix this at this late date, but it was hard to follow the mental communications without the italics. Otherwise very good story so far. I'm loving it.
1/14/2021 c4 Wodokeka
I'm rooting for Vell. Great story so far especially with the character development.
I'm rooting for Vell. Great story so far especially with the character development.
1/23/2020 c23 Lucy Elizabeth Dawson
Great idea and really well written, loved both your stories about the green/gold!
Great idea and really well written, loved both your stories about the green/gold!
8/3/2018 c23 Alfa Wolfcub
Congratulations on publishing your book! I hope you do well. And thankyou for the time and effort that went into this story, especially when you were writing your own book. You are awesome, and I to say goodbye to your pern story.
Congratulations on publishing your book! I hope you do well. And thankyou for the time and effort that went into this story, especially when you were writing your own book. You are awesome, and I to say goodbye to your pern story.
8/2/2018 c17 Alfa Wolfcub
They just need a lot he dragons to attack. Flame them. Take them between forever! Protect your queen Bendon!
They just need a lot he dragons to attack. Flame them. Take them between forever! Protect your queen Bendon!
8/2/2018 c16 Alfa Wolfcub
Please don't let the new weyrleader be the bad guy. Please? I hope the new queen riders ability to sense connections will help the poor pair. And her, as I assume they are going to attempt to steal her queen.
Please don't let the new weyrleader be the bad guy. Please? I hope the new queen riders ability to sense connections will help the poor pair. And her, as I assume they are going to attempt to steal her queen.
8/2/2018 c14 Alfa Wolfcub
That was unexpected. Is that even allowed if the mating flight wasn't declared an open one? Is he allowed to be there? I' it wasn't K'lin but ok with you the obvious choice :)
That was unexpected. Is that even allowed if the mating flight wasn't declared an open one? Is he allowed to be there? I' it wasn't K'lin but ok with you the obvious choice :)
8/1/2018 c12 Alfa Wolfcub
It might have been better if they had both died! Do these hidden players have a way to decompress the dragon, or are they just going to imprison her?
It might have been better if they had both died! Do these hidden players have a way to decompress the dragon, or are they just going to imprison her?