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you're such a homophobic asswad
4/26/2012 c1 
23Akallas von Aerok
Hello, it's AoL here. Thank you for reviewing my story, so I wanted to show you the thanks by giving a review for your story. But instead, I read a very tempting idea for HP story. With your permission, if you don't intend to write a full out story, I'd like to write the story for this. If you haven't told anyone that he or she could do it.
With thanks,
AoL
23Akallas von AerokHello, it's AoL here. Thank you for reviewing my story, so I wanted to show you the thanks by giving a review for your story. But instead, I read a very tempting idea for HP story. With your permission, if you don't intend to write a full out story, I'd like to write the story for this. If you haven't told anyone that he or she could do it.
With thanks,
AoL
12/18/2008 c1 2throughDeesEyes
Oh that's actually quite interesting. I like the idea, and the story line. I'd love to see how you'd actualy go about writing that;d.
I also LOVE! your pen-name and I hope (if you've read the chronicals of Druss the legend -who i'm in love with) you may know where I got the pen-name I have.
great one.
:d
2throughDeesEyesOh that's actually quite interesting. I like the idea, and the story line. I'd love to see how you'd actualy go about writing that;d.
I also LOVE! your pen-name and I hope (if you've read the chronicals of Druss the legend -who i'm in love with) you may know where I got the pen-name I have.
great one.
:d
3/25/2008 c1 2I'dBeSullenWithoutTheCullens
Okay...good general Idea...just one problem...YOU CAN'T KILL NEVILLE!
2I'dBeSullenWithoutTheCullensOkay...good general Idea...just one problem...YOU CAN'T KILL NEVILLE!
8/30/2007 c1 TrippyG
Your "stories" have been reported. This is not a fiction and it violates the TOS. If you're too damned lazy to write your own fics, don't waste server space. It's no surprise that someone who thought up this crap is too dumb to follow the most obvious of rules, though. You get reminders every time you upload this shit that tell you it's not allowed, can you NOT READ?
Your "stories" have been reported. This is not a fiction and it violates the TOS. If you're too damned lazy to write your own fics, don't waste server space. It's no surprise that someone who thought up this crap is too dumb to follow the most obvious of rules, though. You get reminders every time you upload this shit that tell you it's not allowed, can you NOT READ?
8/23/2007 c1 master
update curious what you wil make of it
update curious what you wil make of it
8/23/2007 c1 KathGrangerPotter
well... I'm sure Harry could do well WITHOUT the basilic lol. but, besides that, seems like a cool fic. maybe you could just make a small chap about Harry's life, and the 2nd one you'd jump to 4th or 5th year...
and it would be even cooler if harry had a small... harem. not like some fics, where the girls are 'in love' with each other, wich is stupid, but more like a political one. and you could put in there Hermione, Fleur, Susan, etc...
Besides that, your other ideas were very interesting...
let me know if and what are you going to do, ok?
cheers*
well... I'm sure Harry could do well WITHOUT the basilic lol. but, besides that, seems like a cool fic. maybe you could just make a small chap about Harry's life, and the 2nd one you'd jump to 4th or 5th year...
and it would be even cooler if harry had a small... harem. not like some fics, where the girls are 'in love' with each other, wich is stupid, but more like a political one. and you could put in there Hermione, Fleur, Susan, etc...
Besides that, your other ideas were very interesting...
let me know if and what are you going to do, ok?
cheers*
8/23/2007 c1 1Stygius.Magic
nicely thought out.. i would love to see someone take it up... i guess at some stage they will star to tailor it towards their own ideas, and ur will get used as more guidelines... i personally like the ideas, besides prehaps:
harry giving the 'others' protection when they go in to the DoM. I would prefer if he gave them to hermione, and told her that he wasn't going, but arrives later only to save the day, just before the Order arrives, so it looks like he is one of them... but at the same time hermione recognises the markings on the basilisk cloak he is wearing (as it is the same as hers) and also from his fighting style. She thanks him later for saving her, as asks for further training for her revenge.
also, not sure where you going with the idea of the basilisk. though i do like the idea about harry beating and taking all of tom's knowledge in the CoS incident.
plus, i love the idea of harry helping fluer i think that is truly unique... i would love to see Gabby make the biggest break in harry's personality, and not because of him being weak against veela, but more children and everything - that might help fleur decide on her feeling for him.
plus, for the first book, voldy could use the stone which will give him his body, but will not break the protection that Nev still commands, this could be something used in the 3rd book, where once bella realizes that her 'master' is alive' she is able to bring nev to him, but Voldy still can't AK him.. and thus the need for the ritual in the 4th book, and all the TriWiz. it will be harry that is able to save nev from the other DEs though after voldy has tried (again) to AK nev.
anyway, i thought i would add a little to the story plan as well, these are just some of the idas that popped into my head, as i was reading ur plan... anyway, i do hope someone does take this plan up.. its has great potential... cheers
1Stygius.Magicnicely thought out.. i would love to see someone take it up... i guess at some stage they will star to tailor it towards their own ideas, and ur will get used as more guidelines... i personally like the ideas, besides prehaps:
harry giving the 'others' protection when they go in to the DoM. I would prefer if he gave them to hermione, and told her that he wasn't going, but arrives later only to save the day, just before the Order arrives, so it looks like he is one of them... but at the same time hermione recognises the markings on the basilisk cloak he is wearing (as it is the same as hers) and also from his fighting style. She thanks him later for saving her, as asks for further training for her revenge.
also, not sure where you going with the idea of the basilisk. though i do like the idea about harry beating and taking all of tom's knowledge in the CoS incident.
plus, i love the idea of harry helping fluer i think that is truly unique... i would love to see Gabby make the biggest break in harry's personality, and not because of him being weak against veela, but more children and everything - that might help fleur decide on her feeling for him.
plus, for the first book, voldy could use the stone which will give him his body, but will not break the protection that Nev still commands, this could be something used in the 3rd book, where once bella realizes that her 'master' is alive' she is able to bring nev to him, but Voldy still can't AK him.. and thus the need for the ritual in the 4th book, and all the TriWiz. it will be harry that is able to save nev from the other DEs though after voldy has tried (again) to AK nev.
anyway, i thought i would add a little to the story plan as well, these are just some of the idas that popped into my head, as i was reading ur plan... anyway, i do hope someone does take this plan up.. its has great potential... cheers