12/15/2013 c1 corintios
I fucking loved you clinical Itachi and not-quite-emotionless Sasuke and everything about this fanfic.
Listen, if you ever write something else about them, the boys possessing the same personalities as in this fic, please let me know! I would love to read (and review of course).
thank you for posting it!
I fucking loved you clinical Itachi and not-quite-emotionless Sasuke and everything about this fanfic.
Listen, if you ever write something else about them, the boys possessing the same personalities as in this fic, please let me know! I would love to read (and review of course).
thank you for posting it!
5/4/2013 c1 10Arya May
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Oh my god.
This is arguably one of the only good pieces written on these two in the entire archive. Great work.
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Oh my god.
This is arguably one of the only good pieces written on these two in the entire archive. Great work.
2/20/2013 c1 rabid behemoth
Wow, I was going through my favorites a found this again...oh god. I miss the classic ItaSasu, like this. From before Itachi was such a good guy greg, back when he was a sick, twisted monster and could torture Sasuke PROPERLY.
This is the stuff of legend. Please be aware that there are still people appreciating this so many years later. Thanks for writing it!
And yes, I logged out just so I could leave a second review. Because some fics deserve two. :D
Wow, I was going through my favorites a found this again...oh god. I miss the classic ItaSasu, like this. From before Itachi was such a good guy greg, back when he was a sick, twisted monster and could torture Sasuke PROPERLY.
This is the stuff of legend. Please be aware that there are still people appreciating this so many years later. Thanks for writing it!
And yes, I logged out just so I could leave a second review. Because some fics deserve two. :D
9/11/2011 c1 6KatelyndD
:O Loved it! Really well written -have to say I love the gore- please write a sequel!
:O Loved it! Really well written -have to say I love the gore- please write a sequel!
6/1/2011 c1 25sasunaru2themax
:D I like fictions where Itachi ends up popping joints, cutting his brother and then causing him to cum via whatever means :D xxx this was brilliant ;) xxx
:D I like fictions where Itachi ends up popping joints, cutting his brother and then causing him to cum via whatever means :D xxx this was brilliant ;) xxx
2/17/2010 c1 GiggleFunny
actually, this is one of my favorite of your stories. you capture itachi purfectly (even if i was hoping to see him lose control XD) i would LOVE another lemony sequal!
actually, this is one of my favorite of your stories. you capture itachi purfectly (even if i was hoping to see him lose control XD) i would LOVE another lemony sequal!
1/4/2010 c1 love-Sasunaru13
I DEMAND A SEQUAL D: lol no seriously this was awesome keep up the good work (especially the itasasu ;D)
I DEMAND A SEQUAL D: lol no seriously this was awesome keep up the good work (especially the itasasu ;D)
8/12/2009 c1 1Reginleifthevalkyrie
I love how this is all just an interesting, slightly distant game for Itachi. Not even a game, really, it's just him absent-mindedly messing with his brother, like you'd mess with a napkin in your hands.
I love how this is all just an interesting, slightly distant game for Itachi. Not even a game, really, it's just him absent-mindedly messing with his brother, like you'd mess with a napkin in your hands.
5/6/2009 c1 Sachi Devi
Personally, I don't think you've failed. This is a very interesting darkfic. I'd love to see a sequel. It has a well balanced amount of psychotic thoughts and erotism. Only one remark: don't go into gore more. I think it will ruin the mood :] Take care and write more.
Personally, I don't think you've failed. This is a very interesting darkfic. I'd love to see a sequel. It has a well balanced amount of psychotic thoughts and erotism. Only one remark: don't go into gore more. I think it will ruin the mood :] Take care and write more.
12/21/2008 c1 Roman C Lee
Nope, you don't fail. I had a lot of fun reading this, actually . . . That much blood, and sadistic thought does qualify as DARK, lol. Heh, it might be weird to say I had a lot of 'fun' reading a story where Sasuke gets kinda/sorta/really mutilated, but I did. Maybe I'm sadistic too! *gasps* Nah, I just think you're a fantastic writer, and so sucked me into this story . . . and yeah, I'm probably a bit sadistic when it comes to what I like to read. That was HOT! Woo! And I really like the way you write Itachi, AND Sasuke. You did a fantastic job writing this ^-^. It's one of a kind awesome. *cheers*
Nope, you don't fail. I had a lot of fun reading this, actually . . . That much blood, and sadistic thought does qualify as DARK, lol. Heh, it might be weird to say I had a lot of 'fun' reading a story where Sasuke gets kinda/sorta/really mutilated, but I did. Maybe I'm sadistic too! *gasps* Nah, I just think you're a fantastic writer, and so sucked me into this story . . . and yeah, I'm probably a bit sadistic when it comes to what I like to read. That was HOT! Woo! And I really like the way you write Itachi, AND Sasuke. You did a fantastic job writing this ^-^. It's one of a kind awesome. *cheers*
8/12/2008 c1 regeargewew3
more more more more more xD
I want them to go further *evil laugh*
Oh yeah... please write more :)?
more more more more more xD
I want them to go further *evil laugh*
Oh yeah... please write more :)?
5/31/2008 c1 Viviane Danglars
Perfect! You didn't fail, really, and I think I'm a real perv because right now I'm just thinking about how this could be even BETTER and darker in one eventual sequel. :P I'm also totally mad, I think, because I found both Itachi and Sasuke sweet. Itachi was tender (his little obsession for his brother's body... it IS tender!) and Sas'ke was lovely.
*agrees* Good done, Sas'ke-kun, when your brother's up with his devious ideas, just let him do it. u_u''
Perfect! You didn't fail, really, and I think I'm a real perv because right now I'm just thinking about how this could be even BETTER and darker in one eventual sequel. :P I'm also totally mad, I think, because I found both Itachi and Sasuke sweet. Itachi was tender (his little obsession for his brother's body... it IS tender!) and Sas'ke was lovely.
*agrees* Good done, Sas'ke-kun, when your brother's up with his devious ideas, just let him do it. u_u''