
9/2/2010 c2
6Scrivensabre
Love it! The ending was beauuuuutiful...
My favourite quote:
"Because he loves you and you love him and true love should always be fixed in the end," he says mockingly. "Because I want my best friend back and you're an idiot!"
:D Great story, one of the best James/Lily fics I've read.

Love it! The ending was beauuuuutiful...
My favourite quote:
"Because he loves you and you love him and true love should always be fixed in the end," he says mockingly. "Because I want my best friend back and you're an idiot!"
:D Great story, one of the best James/Lily fics I've read.
8/24/2009 c2 lundigurrl
loved this story. definitely one of my faves for sure love :]
loved this story. definitely one of my faves for sure love :]
4/26/2009 c2 Slytherin-Always
Well you have kind of done the impossible - made me feel sorry for James. I normally loathe me because of what he did to Severus at school, but the James you made is so sweet, kind and caring. I loved what he said about her shadow and how he noticed her hair.
Most of all though I loved how it was Sirius who sorted them both out "Because he loves you and you love him and true love should always be fixed in the end"
As always an A* fanfic.
Well you have kind of done the impossible - made me feel sorry for James. I normally loathe me because of what he did to Severus at school, but the James you made is so sweet, kind and caring. I loved what he said about her shadow and how he noticed her hair.
Most of all though I loved how it was Sirius who sorted them both out "Because he loves you and you love him and true love should always be fixed in the end"
As always an A* fanfic.
8/19/2008 c2
43WeAreTomorrow
like how it's 2d pov. good for you for trying something new (rhyming too!) i really like it!

like how it's 2d pov. good for you for trying something new (rhyming too!) i really like it!
3/10/2008 c2
9melissaeverlasting
LOL, "like it? Hate it?" kind of describes Lily and James's relationship. Anyway, this was great! It was in character, and I really liked your unique choice of second-person narration.
I don't think they say the word "freaking" in the UK, though, do they? Oh well. I wouldn't know, I'm not British. I just watch Doctor Who. ;)
-Melissa

LOL, "like it? Hate it?" kind of describes Lily and James's relationship. Anyway, this was great! It was in character, and I really liked your unique choice of second-person narration.
I don't think they say the word "freaking" in the UK, though, do they? Oh well. I wouldn't know, I'm not British. I just watch Doctor Who. ;)
-Melissa
11/5/2007 c2
1InLoveWithHarry
That was.. AMAZING! Really well written. You got all the characters so right. I loved it!

That was.. AMAZING! Really well written. You got all the characters so right. I loved it!
10/25/2007 c2 Kyla
I really loved the way you made Lily seem. I liked the way they got together, good writing style and good story. Thanks!
I really loved the way you made Lily seem. I liked the way they got together, good writing style and good story. Thanks!