8/27/2019 c27 Cony
What the actual f***k ?!
The story is cute, but... I mean you insisted that there were no phones at some point and some chapters later... hop! phones exist! And planes! Why the Kool-aid-man? Why Darth Vader?
That really stops our reading flow because it makes no sense.
The feelings are clearly described and the situations are out of the ordinary so it's refreshing even if sometime it's quite stunning.
But Tsunade would never call a fellow Ninja "Bitch", nor would Neji call her "baa-san", nor would Tenten be so vulgar . That makes them feel out of character.

Well I think you did a grat job writting all this. You should be proud.

8/6/2014 c9 Bob
Were you... high when you wrote all of this...? Or do you just not follow the show as closely? Lol... Well, good to see someone enjoying themselves, I guess...

5/16/2013 c27 Sarahi Rocha
She chopped of hi legs?!

5/16/2013 c8 Sarahi Rocha
Who is Serene?

5/15/2013 c4 Sarahi Rocha
What!?

4/3/2011 c28 Kaharumi
What a random ending... Alls well ends well I guess... May Lee be a youthful sensei and that Tenten and Neji be successful carolers!

Baaaaaaaiiiiiiieeeehh,

Kaharumi(Rumi)

4/3/2011 c26 Kaharumi
Two-by-four-guy is bad at revenge.

Baaaaaaaaaiiiiiiieeehh,

Kaharumi(Rumi)

4/3/2011 c18 Kaharumi
Hanabi & Aiko are soooo cote and devious! Maybe my lil' sis isn't so bad after all... :D

Baaaaaiiiiiiieeeeehh,

Kaharumi(Rumi)