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2/18/2015 c1 20Pheonix09
That was cute and awesome, I loved it and nice job
10/27/2014 c1 2ASL-Pirates-Lover
i love this song! It is one of my fav songs! I luv u book 2! It was awesome!
8/25/2014 c1 13Unseen Watcher
I like this version too. Nice.
9/14/2013 c1 meep15
Meep hi
1/3/2011 c1 11Ninjy
I completely and absolutely loved this! Great, great, great job!
2/15/2010 c1 147Moonsetta
Wow great song reference. Evanesence rules! Just like TMNT!
9/29/2007 c1 7Calypphire
Aww, brilliant. You're good. (=^.^=)
8/27/2007 c1 203BubblyShell22
Great story. The song really fits, although song lyrics aren't allowed on this site. Still, it was really good. You are a good writer.

The Bubbly One,

8/26/2007 c1 14Cool Jay
Very interesting how the structure was made. The alternate ending you created was also excellently well thought. But I have to say that the music doesn't match towards the ending. At the begginning it suits pefectly well the battle, until the moment Raph is hesitating. I'd say the ending version in the movie would've matched, because the music is melancholic, so is the atmosphere when Raph runs away, leaving both him and his brother confused of what had just happened.

Most of Evanescence's songs are depressing, and what I'm trying to say is that your ending doesn't really fit in that type of music.

But despite all the effort you made, I say it was a good idea to have made a story like that. I really loved it when Leo apologizes and they hug in the end. Just pick the right music for the story and most of all, you have to know what are the lyrics' meanings, like towards which side it's going (positive side, negative side), what it's all about, the emotions, ect. You know, an "analysis" of the song.

I hope you don't take this hard, I'm just giving you advice of what you could do better. :)

Again, great story!

Cool Jay
8/26/2007 c1 3Bumblebeeluver122
this story is very good
8/25/2007 c1 cometandme
This was beautiful, i really liked the alternate ending of this part of the movie...great job...thumbs up!

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