
7/22/2020 c1 Guest
Me encantó quiero que sigas
Me encantó quiero que sigas
12/15/2016 c2 Tahira
Omg it's sooooooo good
Omg it's sooooooo good
8/18/2012 c11
4Lil-Lioness-Cub
No, the chapter title was all but misleading. As Christian Kane sang in Thinking of You, they were so damn good, I guess they never stood a chance. (And it's a brilliant line so I'm glad I managed to say it at all... It might feature at one point in a fic of mine D)

No, the chapter title was all but misleading. As Christian Kane sang in Thinking of You, they were so damn good, I guess they never stood a chance. (And it's a brilliant line so I'm glad I managed to say it at all... It might feature at one point in a fic of mine D)
2/4/2012 c1 Guest
Awesome!
Awesome!
1/23/2012 c1 sanbeegoldiewhitey
Lily's name is Lily Luna Potter not Lily Evans Potter. The latter was Harry's mother.
Lily's name is Lily Luna Potter not Lily Evans Potter. The latter was Harry's mother.
12/22/2008 c2 pencilsinpacks
i love it! really cute!
i love it! really cute!
11/26/2008 c18
10lilyre
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! it was so cute, it was excellently developed... honostly the only thing i could ever critique (er... spelling) was maybe a use of larger vocabulary. But, that is really not that important(and probably the only reason I'm mentioning it is because of stupid Vocabulary books/Homework)... you know what just forget i said that I LOVED THIS STORY!

I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! it was so cute, it was excellently developed... honostly the only thing i could ever critique (er... spelling) was maybe a use of larger vocabulary. But, that is really not that important(and probably the only reason I'm mentioning it is because of stupid Vocabulary books/Homework)... you know what just forget i said that I LOVED THIS STORY!