for Dirty Little Secret6/27/2012 c23 
1LULUCENA7
I'm not sure how many times I've read this story but I LOVE IT! If you're still writing I would love to see a sequel to this story! Shane should try to get revenge on John and Maria... Also Trish and Randy need to get together! Oh please come back with a sequel! I know it's been a long time but I would love to read more of your writing!
1LULUCENA7I'm not sure how many times I've read this story but I LOVE IT! If you're still writing I would love to see a sequel to this story! Shane should try to get revenge on John and Maria... Also Trish and Randy need to get together! Oh please come back with a sequel! I know it's been a long time but I would love to read more of your writing!
4/5/2008 c23 20schmackie
hun, im gonna say this clearly... MAKE A SEQUEL! =] This was a great story. only one thing i think you should change... i probably make it M next time... just the sex scenes are a little... sketchy. otherwise it was GREAT! =]
20schmackiehun, im gonna say this clearly... MAKE A SEQUEL! =] This was a great story. only one thing i think you should change... i probably make it M next time... just the sex scenes are a little... sketchy. otherwise it was GREAT! =]
2/9/2008 c23 4Mrs.Moony86
Just read the whole story in one sitting. I loved it! This is such an amazing story I can't wait to read the next installment. (Which I am going to do now) I can't believe this was your first story! This was so well written and well developed.
Terrific work. I am off to read the next part.
4Mrs.Moony86Just read the whole story in one sitting. I loved it! This is such an amazing story I can't wait to read the next installment. (Which I am going to do now) I can't believe this was your first story! This was so well written and well developed.
Terrific work. I am off to read the next part.
12/23/2007 c1 4Gracknakenfuk
This is great! I can't ... just ... ahh ... wow ... can't wait to read more of your work! :) keep writing man you good
4GracknakenfukThis is great! I can't ... just ... ahh ... wow ... can't wait to read more of your work! :) keep writing man you good
12/8/2007 c23 6Cross-Eyed.Under.Your.Drug
oh my God, it's the end.. wow just amazing story I loved it and I enjoyed reading it so much! Please keep on going with the awesome stories! Great ending.
For now, goodbye and I hope to read another awesome story of yours.
6Cross-Eyed.Under.Your.Drugoh my God, it's the end.. wow just amazing story I loved it and I enjoyed reading it so much! Please keep on going with the awesome stories! Great ending.
For now, goodbye and I hope to read another awesome story of yours.
12/2/2007 c23 2WriterDude1994
This is the best story I've ever read!
I love how Trish finally got back at Shane.
Damn, I don't want this story to end!
great job!
2WriterDude1994This is the best story I've ever read!
I love how Trish finally got back at Shane.
Damn, I don't want this story to end!
great job!
12/1/2007 c23 11Disco Inferno1
I didn’t give up on you and this fic, I promise. My apologies for taking so long to review. This was very nice: “John was absolutely correct in thinking that by sleeping with his best friend it would change their relationship. It did. But he was wrong in holding back for so long for fear that it would destroy the mutual love and respect between them.” Well-written and perfect for their relationship. This was just a great line: “Little did Shane know that Trish was now holding all the cards, and a can of mace just in case.” I love how Trish plans on taking Shane’s confession to Vince despite threatening to do so—it was a promise rather than a threat, I suppose, is what I’m saying. I hope you don’t mind my honesty—I can’t decide if I like the ending as is or if I want more. Yes, I adore that Maria just says ‘good-bye’ and hangs up on Shane but it’s not really a break-up. He’s still got to figure that out. I doubt he’ll take that lying down. But that is if he’s still around. He can’t really react to Maria if Vince ‘removes’ him from the company. I suppose I wonder if I want to see the fall out of the break-up and Trish taking the confession to Vince.
Well, overall, I think you have something to be proud of as your first fic. Your writing style is excellent and you obviously put some considerable time and effort into this story. So keep writing! I don’t know if there’s anything left to John and Maria’s story but you should definitely keep writing.
11Disco Inferno1I didn’t give up on you and this fic, I promise. My apologies for taking so long to review. This was very nice: “John was absolutely correct in thinking that by sleeping with his best friend it would change their relationship. It did. But he was wrong in holding back for so long for fear that it would destroy the mutual love and respect between them.” Well-written and perfect for their relationship. This was just a great line: “Little did Shane know that Trish was now holding all the cards, and a can of mace just in case.” I love how Trish plans on taking Shane’s confession to Vince despite threatening to do so—it was a promise rather than a threat, I suppose, is what I’m saying. I hope you don’t mind my honesty—I can’t decide if I like the ending as is or if I want more. Yes, I adore that Maria just says ‘good-bye’ and hangs up on Shane but it’s not really a break-up. He’s still got to figure that out. I doubt he’ll take that lying down. But that is if he’s still around. He can’t really react to Maria if Vince ‘removes’ him from the company. I suppose I wonder if I want to see the fall out of the break-up and Trish taking the confession to Vince.
Well, overall, I think you have something to be proud of as your first fic. Your writing style is excellent and you obviously put some considerable time and effort into this story. So keep writing! I don’t know if there’s anything left to John and Maria’s story but you should definitely keep writing.
11/16/2007 c23 50Christal-R
Aw! The ending already? You can't end it like that! lol. That was the awesomest story I've ever read! It gets me worked up, especially when I get to hate Shane lol! I'm glad Maria has found love with John and that Shane finally got what he deserves, lol. Anyways, I do hope that you'll work on a sequel, this story has gotta continue! Don't think that you're doing bad at this cause to me, you've done GREAT GREAT GREAT! lol. Okay I think you got the point so I'll stop there, lol. Keep up the awesome work! :)
50Christal-RAw! The ending already? You can't end it like that! lol. That was the awesomest story I've ever read! It gets me worked up, especially when I get to hate Shane lol! I'm glad Maria has found love with John and that Shane finally got what he deserves, lol. Anyways, I do hope that you'll work on a sequel, this story has gotta continue! Don't think that you're doing bad at this cause to me, you've done GREAT GREAT GREAT! lol. Okay I think you got the point so I'll stop there, lol. Keep up the awesome work! :)
11/16/2007 c23 11101mizzpoet101
I thought it was excellent! stupendous! (Sorry i love mary poppins! :-)
i am so yearning to say update soon but i can't so... sequel plz?
"There was no reason to continue the charade when she knew there was someone so much better than Shane ready to shout to the whole world that he loved her."
i loved that line!
and yes i think that you should use these characters in future stories missy!
11101mizzpoet101I thought it was excellent! stupendous! (Sorry i love mary poppins! :-)
i am so yearning to say update soon but i can't so... sequel plz?
"There was no reason to continue the charade when she knew there was someone so much better than Shane ready to shout to the whole world that he loved her."
i loved that line!
and yes i think that you should use these characters in future stories missy!
11/16/2007 c23 3Abielle
wow! that was really good! I'm very impressed well done. And who ever doesn't like it should be shot :P okay maybe not that harsh but they should have some sense slapped into them :P I loved the whole story and I think you made the right choices with parings. I would absolutely LOVE to see a sequal and I'm sure most people would too =]
so how are you?
been up to any thing recently?
oh and you weren't supposed to recognise the people in my other story, it was one i totally made up lol :P x abi x
3Abiellewow! that was really good! I'm very impressed well done. And who ever doesn't like it should be shot :P okay maybe not that harsh but they should have some sense slapped into them :P I loved the whole story and I think you made the right choices with parings. I would absolutely LOVE to see a sequal and I'm sure most people would too =]
so how are you?
been up to any thing recently?
oh and you weren't supposed to recognise the people in my other story, it was one i totally made up lol :P x abi x
11/16/2007 c23 TheLegendKiller28
this was a great story And take it for wat its worth but i would love a sequal and u should defintly use the same characters in another story same pairings great job u are really really good
hope theres another 1 soon
Mike
this was a great story And take it for wat its worth but i would love a sequal and u should defintly use the same characters in another story same pairings great job u are really really good
hope theres another 1 soon
Mike
11/16/2007 c23 8skiptothegoodbit
You've done an amazing job with the whole story and I loved how the relationship between Maria and John built up. The Trish and Randy parts were really sweet too and I love how she finally got the advantage over Shane.
You should definitely do a sequel, I would love to see one. But anyways, great job, awesome work, loved it!
8skiptothegoodbitYou've done an amazing job with the whole story and I loved how the relationship between Maria and John built up. The Trish and Randy parts were really sweet too and I love how she finally got the advantage over Shane.
You should definitely do a sequel, I would love to see one. But anyways, great job, awesome work, loved it!