8/27/2007 c1 inukags4eva9292
aw! kawai!

keep it up.

see ya

8/26/2007 c1 11Say0mi Saki
Aww that was so beautiful! Everything you write is beautiful though! I love it just like all your other oneshots! It was so well written and adorable it's hard not to love!

8/26/2007 c1 1Kireshai
It's beautiful story concept, but excessively hard to read because the grammar is pretty appalling.