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5/13/2012 c9 ChinkyBella
Even with the errors , I love this story. :D
2/4/2012 c2 1Dammit Jane
Hey. This story looked really good, and I was looking foward to reading it, but you MUST proof read. You are missing SO many words that understanding it is VERY difficult. It has potential, but I won't read the rest because of how little sense it makes.
4/22/2011 c2 n
seriously, ur grammar n english usage needs much more practise.
10/31/2010 c1 nikki
I like where this is

Going but you might want to go back and finsh most of ur sentces. I'm sorry if I sound rude but you stoped writting half way through a sentnce.
10/18/2010 c1 hatergirl
man i don't andrestand anyting you're maiking so many misteiks that is anoying to read it
9/16/2010 c2 26aero13
Plot is fine. But, I read through it, and words were missing. I could find what you wanted there, but it would be neater if they were there.
1/1/2010 c2 28Writing Keeper
You have some missing words... is there something wrong with your computer?
7/30/2009 c1 3RavenUchiha
You have a good story base. Though I have noticed that you left a LOT of unfinished sentences and mispelled words. Try to ask a friend or someone to proof read your story so that won't happen again.
6/24/2009 c1 obsessed-kunai
very good plot but you might want to reread it , some parts didnt make sense
5/10/2009 c2 tigers16
either your english is terrible or you mean to do that but if you are then please stop!
3/15/2009 c5 1Littlecupoframen
this is a very good story.

here are some more japanese foods for reference

- tempura

-sushi

-dango (sweet dumplings, Itachi's favorite)

- Sake (japanese beer)

-Chirashi ( I think its a rice bowl with veggies and meat..or a kind of soup?)

-Onigiri (rice balls, often filled with fish or meats)
11/29/2008 c1 1KaiKi09
i was wondering are you purposly leaving words out because it is a bit confusing for me
11/19/2008 c9 8Emilx311
awesome story:)
9/28/2008 c1 Narutolover
love it, just like sasuke may be
8/9/2008 c9 Jeane Swift
i love this story i love how deidara is a flirt
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