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8/27/2007 c2 6Jessadee-x
No problem! I'm always happy to review your stories if you really 'em. But I think you should really should continue, it sounds really good and I'm kind of gettin into it already. So please continue, it sounds like an awesome, must-read story.

xoxo Draykor
8/26/2007 c1 Jessadee-x
That was good! And thanks for being inspired by my story. I didn't know I had that kind of power. But I guess I do. You should totally continue it! It was awesome! And I agree, it was cute. And it's okay if a couple of parts and lines were from my story, but it's okay. You're new here, and this is your first story so I understand. Since it's your first story you have no idea what to put in it so you have to use some ideas from other authors and that's okay. But I'm sure you'll come up with stuff on your own, you obviously have some great ideas they just hadn't come to you yet. But keep working on it! You'll get better. I know you will.

xoxo Draykor
8/26/2007 c1 24Demenior
Wow, I'll admit this was really aborable. Short and sweet, not too much but enough to make me smile. Last line was awesome, and the 'Came in through the window" was a great line.

Good work!

-Demenior
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