for The Gift3/1/2014 c7 ailem2707
Hey! What a great story you hace here :) . I really liked the idea, the pairings anda the way you put the characthers, even if some of them are dead in the current timeline, it was a story that did not defy Kishimoto's work. I have a teeny little question for you, it'll be in my mother language 'cause i don't think i could express (sp?) it in english
¿¡Cómo chicha se te ocurrieron las relaciones genéticas, nerviosas y psicológicas para explicar el sello del pájaro enjaulado!? ¡¿Eres neurolog o qué?!
Greetings from Chile ;)
Hey! What a great story you hace here :) . I really liked the idea, the pairings anda the way you put the characthers, even if some of them are dead in the current timeline, it was a story that did not defy Kishimoto's work. I have a teeny little question for you, it'll be in my mother language 'cause i don't think i could express (sp?) it in english
¿¡Cómo chicha se te ocurrieron las relaciones genéticas, nerviosas y psicológicas para explicar el sello del pájaro enjaulado!? ¡¿Eres neurolog o qué?!
Greetings from Chile ;)
9/25/2013 c7 Guest
this was an awesome a die hard fan of naruto i request u to write
DATTEBAYO
this was an awesome a die hard fan of naruto i request u to write
DATTEBAYO
6/20/2013 c4 Guest
The Jutsu was very good :O can i possibly steal it one of these days?! XD
The Jutsu was very good :O can i possibly steal it one of these days?! XD
6/20/2013 c1 
17Fher34
XDD
" All I ask is that if you see Shikamaru looking like he's doing a better job than me…sabotage him somehow."
"Naruto-kun," she chided.
Hehe, i loved that part very much! (:
17Fher34XDD
" All I ask is that if you see Shikamaru looking like he's doing a better job than me…sabotage him somehow."
"Naruto-kun," she chided.
Hehe, i loved that part very much! (:
5/15/2013 c5 Pure Opposites
I had a science book right next to me and the only word I recognized was neurotransmitters
I feel so sorry for my science teacher
I had a science book right next to me and the only word I recognized was neurotransmitters
I feel so sorry for my science teacher
7/7/2010 c7 27mymanisfictional
Oh my gosh, this story was great! It was amazing, it had humor, drama, pain, betrayal, and so much more. You really did a good job with this story. The only criticism I have would be that whenever you jump from one scene to another, like going from Hinata and Naruto talking, to a conversation between Neji and Tenten, you should separate it somehow with a line or break; that way it's less confusing. All in all though, I loved it.
27mymanisfictionalOh my gosh, this story was great! It was amazing, it had humor, drama, pain, betrayal, and so much more. You really did a good job with this story. The only criticism I have would be that whenever you jump from one scene to another, like going from Hinata and Naruto talking, to a conversation between Neji and Tenten, you should separate it somehow with a line or break; that way it's less confusing. All in all though, I loved it.
5/7/2010 c7 4paty-san5
Brilliant! I gota tell you that I first start reading this story like two years ago, more or less, and was left in chapter five. After that i lost the story since I didn't have an account to save it in. Just recently I started looking for the oldest stories and I found it again! XD Now it is finished. You did a great work.
4paty-san5Brilliant! I gota tell you that I first start reading this story like two years ago, more or less, and was left in chapter five. After that i lost the story since I didn't have an account to save it in. Just recently I started looking for the oldest stories and I found it again! XD Now it is finished. You did a great work.
4/25/2010 c7 4UnseatedShinigami
This was a truly entertaining story. I enjoyed every minute spent reading it. You managed to convey all the uncertainty of a difficult decision made in real life, combined it with actual scientific and medical information while maintaining the use of jutsu and sealing techniques, mixed plenty of angst and real life drama and wrapped it all in the Naruto universe. You took details that needed to be dealt with in the Naruto story while keeping the characters the way they were made, and adding in realistic and believable emotion and actions then jumped several years into the future and made it into a tale of love, seeming betrayal, fulfillment of promises made in years past, family bonds and hope for the future. Great job.
4UnseatedShinigamiThis was a truly entertaining story. I enjoyed every minute spent reading it. You managed to convey all the uncertainty of a difficult decision made in real life, combined it with actual scientific and medical information while maintaining the use of jutsu and sealing techniques, mixed plenty of angst and real life drama and wrapped it all in the Naruto universe. You took details that needed to be dealt with in the Naruto story while keeping the characters the way they were made, and adding in realistic and believable emotion and actions then jumped several years into the future and made it into a tale of love, seeming betrayal, fulfillment of promises made in years past, family bonds and hope for the future. Great job.
2/24/2009 c7 GreenRose58
Absolutely amazing job! I love how well thought out everything was, and though I was tempted to double check you research on the gene numbers and all that, I hate anatomy ~_~. But anyway, truly an original and I loved reading it! Keep up the awesome work!
Absolutely amazing job! I love how well thought out everything was, and though I was tempted to double check you research on the gene numbers and all that, I hate anatomy ~_~. But anyway, truly an original and I loved reading it! Keep up the awesome work!
1/20/2009 c7 8Andy Wong Fey Hong
Hi, I just finished reading your whole story. I must say it was quite a ride, I was especially tense throughout reading it as I was afraid that at some point, Neji would revert back to his old self and actually attempt to kill or otherwise maim Hinata before she gets a chance to explain (although Ten Ten doing it was a nice touch. For some reason I don't like Ten Ten/Neji pairing though).
I must wonder if you are a medical student due to the large number of medical jargon which threatened to put me to sleep but thankfully, you put in Naruto's blur perspective and made it amusing.
Good show girl. I don't read the manga, but I generally keep track of what's happening. Is it because Jiraiya died? Just wondering. Anyway, I stopped watching the anime which turned to crap after the timeskip 3 years later.
Great story, will run through your other fics when I have time.
Regards,
Andy Wong
8Andy Wong Fey HongHi, I just finished reading your whole story. I must say it was quite a ride, I was especially tense throughout reading it as I was afraid that at some point, Neji would revert back to his old self and actually attempt to kill or otherwise maim Hinata before she gets a chance to explain (although Ten Ten doing it was a nice touch. For some reason I don't like Ten Ten/Neji pairing though).
I must wonder if you are a medical student due to the large number of medical jargon which threatened to put me to sleep but thankfully, you put in Naruto's blur perspective and made it amusing.
Good show girl. I don't read the manga, but I generally keep track of what's happening. Is it because Jiraiya died? Just wondering. Anyway, I stopped watching the anime which turned to crap after the timeskip 3 years later.
Great story, will run through your other fics when I have time.
Regards,
Andy Wong
1/6/2009 c7 Allicat
officially my new favorite story
officially my new favorite story
12/14/2008 c7 2Hektols
It was a very nice story, now the Hyuugas will be a true family again. I also was sad with chapter 382. You should change the status of the story to Complete, it will help those readers who look after complete stories.
2HektolsIt was a very nice story, now the Hyuugas will be a true family again. I also was sad with chapter 382. You should change the status of the story to Complete, it will help those readers who look after complete stories.
12/14/2008 c5 Hektols
You made a very interesting explanation of the Hyuuga's seal, I wonder how they will knock out Neji.
You made a very interesting explanation of the Hyuuga's seal, I wonder how they will knock out Neji.
12/14/2008 c4 Hektols
Naruto's jutsu was good, it's something that the Naruto of the original manga could develop in the future. I'm surprised by Lee's maturity. I'm glad that Naruto and Hinata reconciled.
Naruto's jutsu was good, it's something that the Naruto of the original manga could develop in the future. I'm surprised by Lee's maturity. I'm glad that Naruto and Hinata reconciled.