for fallen secrets7/17/2016 c2 Guest
What?... Isn't this chapter 1?... That you just copy and pasted onto this?... Ok then... I'm done...
What?... Isn't this chapter 1?... That you just copy and pasted onto this?... Ok then... I'm done...
9/11/2007 c2 
56Monica Moss
Hey! Now that you've posted chapter one again, do you mind posting chapter two?
I'm looking forward to it.
56Monica MossHey! Now that you've posted chapter one again, do you mind posting chapter two?
I'm looking forward to it.
9/11/2007 c2 9PunkMichPhantom
Wow! This was a great chapter! Great job! Update soon, plz and thank you!
9PunkMichPhantomWow! This was a great chapter! Great job! Update soon, plz and thank you!
9/10/2007 c2 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Good chapter. Nice job with Danny's mood.
Keep the good writing.
50acosta perez jose ramiroGood chapter. Nice job with Danny's mood.
Keep the good writing.
9/10/2007 c2 5ChineseIsGreek2Me
I like this so far, good potential in my opinion. But you should know that you've made a slight error in that you've submited the first chapter twice. In otherwords, Ch 1 is Ch1, but Ch2 is also Ch1... if that makes sense. You can check the story if you're not sure what I mean.
5ChineseIsGreek2MeI like this so far, good potential in my opinion. But you should know that you've made a slight error in that you've submited the first chapter twice. In otherwords, Ch 1 is Ch1, but Ch2 is also Ch1... if that makes sense. You can check the story if you're not sure what I mean.
9/10/2007 c2 25Miko in training
ok chapter two is the same as chapter 1 why is that? it is a good story by the way :)
25Miko in trainingok chapter two is the same as chapter 1 why is that? it is a good story by the way :)
8/29/2007 c1 25Miko in training
wow thats good but explainations ae deff needed.. keep up the good work :)
25Miko in trainingwow thats good but explainations ae deff needed.. keep up the good work :)
8/29/2007 c1 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Good start. That reaction from Danny can't mean anything good.
Keep the good writing.
50acosta perez jose ramiroGood start. That reaction from Danny can't mean anything good.
Keep the good writing.