for Ame12/2/2007 c1 Duel Soul
Beautiful use of emotive language, I very much enjoy your type of writing style and a avid reader of your Poisoned Ciannamon series ^-^ Why am I telling you this while reviewing a completely different fanfic that should get more reviews than it deserves... cause I'm too lazy, so live with it . But anyways a wonderful (yet angsty) one-shot with a interesting illustration of SakuSasu realtionship. I look forward to any works you create in the future.
Beautiful use of emotive language, I very much enjoy your type of writing style and a avid reader of your Poisoned Ciannamon series ^-^ Why am I telling you this while reviewing a completely different fanfic that should get more reviews than it deserves... cause I'm too lazy, so live with it . But anyways a wonderful (yet angsty) one-shot with a interesting illustration of SakuSasu realtionship. I look forward to any works you create in the future.
9/12/2007 c1 megg
loved it.
angsty a tad bit yes.
but it was good.
and i liked how you placed
everything
& your writing is very [VERY] good.
i think.. 'wise and paitent'
when i hear it.
i know im random, but does tht make a little sense?
haha
loved the emo words.
it was relly good.
awesome one-shot-er
loved it.
angsty a tad bit yes.
but it was good.
and i liked how you placed
everything
& your writing is very [VERY] good.
i think.. 'wise and paitent'
when i hear it.
i know im random, but does tht make a little sense?
haha
loved the emo words.
it was relly good.
awesome one-shot-er
9/9/2007 c1 
46MintiNeko
Nice and angsty, but is this AU? What's the situation? Then again, it's probably better ambiguous. I really like your naruto work. You have an interesting way of using the characters, although you seem to leave out Kiba, Chouji, and Shino a lot.
46MintiNekoNice and angsty, but is this AU? What's the situation? Then again, it's probably better ambiguous. I really like your naruto work. You have an interesting way of using the characters, although you seem to leave out Kiba, Chouji, and Shino a lot.
9/3/2007 c1 Kitty
That was certainly unique. One of the best written pieces I've read on this site. Interesting, full of depth, and I've always wondered whether it is Naruto or Sasuke that is the true masochist. Great story.
That was certainly unique. One of the best written pieces I've read on this site. Interesting, full of depth, and I've always wondered whether it is Naruto or Sasuke that is the true masochist. Great story.
9/3/2007 c1 21ProfessionallyCrazedNarutoFan
Wow...that was..wow. Yeah. I don't really know what to say, other than that was incredibly well written and touching and moving and whatever words mean that same thing. Definitely a favorite.
21ProfessionallyCrazedNarutoFanWow...that was..wow. Yeah. I don't really know what to say, other than that was incredibly well written and touching and moving and whatever words mean that same thing. Definitely a favorite.
9/2/2007 c1 3Puritimen
Wow.. this is so different from most of the sasusaku fics I've read, but I love it!
You actually kept Sasuke in character, and I thank you for it. X33
Thanks for a good read.
3PuritimenWow.. this is so different from most of the sasusaku fics I've read, but I love it!
You actually kept Sasuke in character, and I thank you for it. X33
Thanks for a good read.
9/2/2007 c1 248sarsaparillia
XD gotta love weird dances. wow, angsty is right, i don't think ive read something that sad in a long time. O_o i usually dont like sad, it makes me do strange things. like cry.
248sarsaparilliaXD gotta love weird dances. wow, angsty is right, i don't think ive read something that sad in a long time. O_o i usually dont like sad, it makes me do strange things. like cry.