for Good Times: Chapter 11/20/2013 c1 JeanneZ84
Well,that is so right,James,wouldn't do that to Florida,unless he was DRUNK.
I can't wait to read more.
JeaneZ84
Well,that is so right,James,wouldn't do that to Florida,unless he was DRUNK.
I can't wait to read more.
JeaneZ84
7/21/2010 c12 
7camerabugs
This is great. I really hope you continue your story because I am totally hooked.
7camerabugsThis is great. I really hope you continue your story because I am totally hooked.
12/25/2009 c12 48PriscillaPal
I really liked this story. You are very talented. I mean not many fan fiction writers get the nuance of believable dialogue. I not only believed it, but the plot seemed totally plausible. And it was nice to see the Evans leave the projects.
48PriscillaPalI really liked this story. You are very talented. I mean not many fan fiction writers get the nuance of believable dialogue. I not only believed it, but the plot seemed totally plausible. And it was nice to see the Evans leave the projects.
9/2/2008 c12 10Sandsibscrazy
This brought a little tear to my eye if I can say. It was just so nostalgic...
I love this, the characters are so IN CHARACTER. Great Story!
10SandsibscrazyThis brought a little tear to my eye if I can say. It was just so nostalgic...
I love this, the characters are so IN CHARACTER. Great Story!
12/21/2007 c12 Rhonda
I was very impressed, and glad to see the Evans family finally leave the projects. Too bad it was at the expense of the death of Florida.
I was very impressed, and glad to see the Evans family finally leave the projects. Too bad it was at the expense of the death of Florida.
12/14/2007 c1 Rhonda
I thought it was pretty good. I am intrigued. I will come back to this site when I get time from my real job.
I thought it was pretty good. I am intrigued. I will come back to this site when I get time from my real job.
11/27/2007 c12 FoxworthSecrets
I've been without a computer, and so didn't see this chapter when you first posted, but seeing this was like receiving an unexpected gift! :) I am delighted to see Walter and Maude. Thank you so much for including the Findlays in your story, and in such an ingenious way explaining loose ends ... like the name change of Henry to James.
Maude calling the FDNY seems just the sort of thing she'd do. :) You've done such a nice job of portraying Maude as she is in a few sentences, and without overdoing it. I liked this:
"For all of Maude's liberal thinking, she could never truly put herself in the shoes of a young black
couple with limited education just starting out, far from home."
I'll be checking in regularly, now. Thank you for this.
And I really liked seeing another glimpse of Florida, as well. I was saddened to read of her dying, but what happens after is so believable and so well written that I look forward to reading more. Usually such a departure in fan fiction would make reading on a chore, but that is definitely NOT the case with yours. ... And Lisa is adorable!
I've been without a computer, and so didn't see this chapter when you first posted, but seeing this was like receiving an unexpected gift! :) I am delighted to see Walter and Maude. Thank you so much for including the Findlays in your story, and in such an ingenious way explaining loose ends ... like the name change of Henry to James.
Maude calling the FDNY seems just the sort of thing she'd do. :) You've done such a nice job of portraying Maude as she is in a few sentences, and without overdoing it. I liked this:
"For all of Maude's liberal thinking, she could never truly put herself in the shoes of a young black
couple with limited education just starting out, far from home."
I'll be checking in regularly, now. Thank you for this.
And I really liked seeing another glimpse of Florida, as well. I was saddened to read of her dying, but what happens after is so believable and so well written that I look forward to reading more. Usually such a departure in fan fiction would make reading on a chore, but that is definitely NOT the case with yours. ... And Lisa is adorable!
11/13/2007 c1 this is so good
it would be good if you started a new story on the cheatah girls and put characters from high school musical or twiches in it thanx let me know i will be here a lot cheking for it could u put coments on ur review page becausse i dont have an email thanx let me know
it would be good if you started a new story on the cheatah girls and put characters from high school musical or twiches in it thanx let me know i will be here a lot cheking for it could u put coments on ur review page becausse i dont have an email thanx let me know
11/10/2007 c1 25RA'AY'MOND
‘Kid Dyn-O-Mite’ I remember. But ‘Junior’, and ‘the militant midget’, those names totally slipped my mind. That’s the great thing about ‘classic TV fan fiction’, it can bring back happy memories, as well as entertain.
Great story, and great work.
25RA'AY'MOND‘Kid Dyn-O-Mite’ I remember. But ‘Junior’, and ‘the militant midget’, those names totally slipped my mind. That’s the great thing about ‘classic TV fan fiction’, it can bring back happy memories, as well as entertain.
Great story, and great work.