for Sarah's Lament1/10/2011 c1 strawberrybanjo
Ah, this was such a sweet poem. I'm glad that they ended up together in the end. For some reason I feel like there is a specific stress on the poem, like how it was written, you know? That you wrote it a specific way for a reason? It's different (and by that I mean every line doesn't rhyme, haha), but I think it's different in a good way.
Ah, this was such a sweet poem. I'm glad that they ended up together in the end. For some reason I feel like there is a specific stress on the poem, like how it was written, you know? That you wrote it a specific way for a reason? It's different (and by that I mean every line doesn't rhyme, haha), but I think it's different in a good way.
8/13/2008 c1 
4terrasomnian
The instant-gratification of an immediate happy ending doesn't seem so bad when it's written in verse. Nice work.
4terrasomnianThe instant-gratification of an immediate happy ending doesn't seem so bad when it's written in verse. Nice work.
10/7/2007 c1 NoBoDyShErEnOmOrE
aww how sweet! ^-^ A little fluffy but i like my fluff that way :)...nice to see a happy ending :) Awesome writing
aww how sweet! ^-^ A little fluffy but i like my fluff that way :)...nice to see a happy ending :) Awesome writing
9/6/2007 c1 7Scarbantia
Yes! *punches in the air, dances a little victory dance* Yes!
I like happy ends!
7ScarbantiaYes! *punches in the air, dances a little victory dance* Yes!
I like happy ends!