
9/11/2007 c2
16Ms Hobgoblin
You've got to love the 'Scott/Virgil' moments...they compliment each other so well. You wrote them true to character, it was nice to see Jeff put his 'hand' in to help his son.
Good advice from Kyrano!
Enjoyed reading this,thanks for posting it!
Hob x

You've got to love the 'Scott/Virgil' moments...they compliment each other so well. You wrote them true to character, it was nice to see Jeff put his 'hand' in to help his son.
Good advice from Kyrano!
Enjoyed reading this,thanks for posting it!
Hob x
9/7/2007 c1 Ms Hobgoblin
I sense a few breakdowns coming on...!
Loved Virgils harsh reaction to Scott's 'mothering' skills, and then his slight regret later on.
As for Scott, I can't wait to see what you have floating in his mind - with all that banging going on...I guess if they dont sort it out before the meeting, its going to be an ugly one.
Update soon.
Hob x
I sense a few breakdowns coming on...!
Loved Virgils harsh reaction to Scott's 'mothering' skills, and then his slight regret later on.
As for Scott, I can't wait to see what you have floating in his mind - with all that banging going on...I guess if they dont sort it out before the meeting, its going to be an ugly one.
Update soon.
Hob x