8/23/2013 c11 Mr.Mykal
Ok i guess
Ok i guess
11/24/2007 c14 67JessieJay13
1) that was a bit of a bittersweet ending
2) usually women have to stay in the hospital for about two days after giving birth to make sure they're okay and get their strength back and stuff
3) great story!
1) that was a bit of a bittersweet ending
2) usually women have to stay in the hospital for about two days after giving birth to make sure they're okay and get their strength back and stuff
3) great story!
11/4/2007 c1 8freeyoursoulx
I like this-it's a very good story. But heads up, next time you write something, work on grammar and spelling, maybe use a beta. I'm no expert myself, and yes- I tend to get a little sloppy with my writing sometimes, but if you do this-more people will read it, and you will get more reviews.
I like this-it's a very good story. But heads up, next time you write something, work on grammar and spelling, maybe use a beta. I'm no expert myself, and yes- I tend to get a little sloppy with my writing sometimes, but if you do this-more people will read it, and you will get more reviews.
10/18/2007 c14 forever-purpe
omg i luv the because she wanted to be with lilly again ending!
omg i luv the because she wanted to be with lilly again ending!
10/14/2007 c14 6mcrgryffindorgal
Aw! How cute! I love this ending. MAybe you should have made Miley die earlier. Haha, that sounded horrible! I mean, like she was living without Lilly for so long...ohmygosh this ending is so sad all of a sudden! Haha...i Think you should have made them both die of old age, together. But that might have been just a little to fairytale like! Ok, im just gonna shut the hell up now! xD
Aw! How cute! I love this ending. MAybe you should have made Miley die earlier. Haha, that sounded horrible! I mean, like she was living without Lilly for so long...ohmygosh this ending is so sad all of a sudden! Haha...i Think you should have made them both die of old age, together. But that might have been just a little to fairytale like! Ok, im just gonna shut the hell up now! xD
10/11/2007 c14 Guest
nice. but uh... u named the second baby miley lilian truscott-stewart... doesn't that mean that julia married someone with the last name truscott or stewart?
nice. but uh... u named the second baby miley lilian truscott-stewart... doesn't that mean that julia married someone with the last name truscott or stewart?
10/4/2007 c12 mcrgryffindorgal
Hehe. I love it. I love Miley, that was cool! Whats bloody knuckles? Awesome chappie!
Hehe. I love it. I love Miley, that was cool! Whats bloody knuckles? Awesome chappie!