for Taking Control9/14/2008 c1 JaneReecey
Sorry about the fact I'm reviewing on the first chapter, Don't ask why because I'm not sure my self. BUT I have read the whole thing (Again) and I still think its BRILLIANT, and tottaly original.
I've never read a story like it, and I never will.
Keep Writing Dude!
P.S I would write a story with you (like it says on your profile) but I don't think I match your writing standards just yet. YOUR TO GOOD! D:
Sorry about the fact I'm reviewing on the first chapter, Don't ask why because I'm not sure my self. BUT I have read the whole thing (Again) and I still think its BRILLIANT, and tottaly original.
I've never read a story like it, and I never will.
Keep Writing Dude!
P.S I would write a story with you (like it says on your profile) but I don't think I match your writing standards just yet. YOUR TO GOOD! D:
9/3/2008 c4 JaneReecey
Wow Ive never read a story like this though, It's different in a good way. :D
It was a tad confusing at first but then I got into it and then I was at the last chapter! No
Update soon? :D
Wow Ive never read a story like this though, It's different in a good way. :D
It was a tad confusing at first but then I got into it and then I was at the last chapter! No
Update soon? :D
9/12/2007 c3 
8the-amazing-lyndz
Bee's Girl this is a wonderful story, I love how you've written it with such a great element of humour...looking forward to reading more...it's going to turn out great if the beginning is any indication...and every chapter just seems to get better and better...can't wait to read more and look into your other stories...Thanks for the Great and Humourous read... Lyndz
8the-amazing-lyndzBee's Girl this is a wonderful story, I love how you've written it with such a great element of humour...looking forward to reading more...it's going to turn out great if the beginning is any indication...and every chapter just seems to get better and better...can't wait to read more and look into your other stories...Thanks for the Great and Humourous read... Lyndz