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9/15/2018 c3 4cyiusblack
update soon
11/15/2017 c3 1inuyasha16451
Omg. That was bloody awesome story so far. Please come back and update this soon.
9/8/2017 c3 Carariz
you wont update this story? when... this story is have interesting plot... c'mon update itttt
3/9/2017 c3 Guest
i love this story hope you continue!
8/26/2016 c3 animerule64
Add more chapters please
7/15/2016 c3 1Scribleyellow
Please update:)
11/13/2014 c3 41Moon Dog 05
Plz update soon
7/5/2010 c3 gulsah
please write more please T-T
10/11/2009 c3 2kin-kinna
Awesome. I hope that you will continue with such stories. Thank you for reading this comment.
9/16/2009 c3 11LightLessStar
You have a very good start overall, but you might want to thinkabout going back over it. You have a few problems that need to be addressed mainly clashing info. Great job overall though. I can't wait for your next issue!
11/30/2008 c3 Wynather Zumnala
That is such a cute story please continue.
11/24/2008 c3 1Bloodgalore
nice story
5/26/2008 c3 1red-crecent-moon
love love love the story whens the next chapter
2/10/2008 c1 13L. C. Webbs
Okay...um it's a good story premise and your writing's not bad, but there are some things your Beta missed.

You can't say 'Meanwhile, The next morning in Konoha' cause that's like saying 'At the same time, but in the future'

Also, you gotta use tenses correctly.(That only seemed to really show up in your summary, but check everywhere just to make sure.)

Keep in mind that this is con crit and I'm not flaming you. You really do have a good story.
1/27/2008 c2 15moonlesslife
Update asap, it's really cute but poor poor Naruto I do feel so sorry for him.
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