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10/4/2007 c1 36gizzymoon
I feel like a completely selfish dolt. I had no idea that you were a writer as well, though I should have guessed. This is wonderful.

It's such a simple, sweet, well written piece. I loved it. Luna was by far one of my favorite characters and you captured both of these seemingly minor charaters so prefectly.

I guess it's my turn. My favorite line...

“Wh-what did you need to talk to me about Luna?” She pulled her hand away from his and Neville was left feeling cold. He hadn’t seen her in such a long time yet here she was again stirring up his simple and seemingly satisfying existence, filling his life of grey with so many shades of color.
9/20/2007 c1 98Shizuku Tsukishima749
This is beautiful! Keep it up! I LOVED the interaction between the two of them, and I also loved where you said no one ever criticized them, that they were two of the bravest people to attend Hogwarts! Bloody brilliant, man, honestly! I completely and utterly LOVED THIS! Plus, the part at the end was MAGNIFICENT! I could just IMAGINE Luna's voice going up like a little kid's! SO CUTE! PLEASE keep up the wonderful work! BOOYAH!

Sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
9/19/2007 c1 kmione
This is really cute...write more soon!

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