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10/13/2007 c1 3Val Skia
It was more like a inside to Sasuke's thoughts...Not too poem-ish. Maybe it's the beat or something. It probably is just me...Maybe if you made it a little more abstract, so that it leaves the reader wondering who the character was...mehmah. Don't mind me~ It did have a clear focus and you did manage to convoy Sasuke's feelings accurately.
10/1/2007 c1 263I'm Nova
Well done and damn true, at least it's how I've alwys seen Sasuke-kun.
9/23/2007 c1 Sora Keyblader
holy fuck! that was bad ass!

must fav!
9/21/2007 c1 20YaoiRocks
WE HEYLO!

o.o That was good I LOVED IT!

Soo...any more expected from you soon m'dear?

~YaoiRocks~

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