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5/19/2018 c1 Guest
You have a great start here. The only problem is you gave up after one chapter we don’t even get trory just ‘surprise i need you to watch Paul anka’ Tristan Wasn’t even mentioned yet. Other then that MAJOR point you should split up your paragraphs more and also have a page break between authors Note/summary/story. You should highly consider coming back to this story edit the already done chapter and finish the story itself. Trory smut and fluff was expected when i read ‘bible boy and mary’
7/22/2010 c1 JJsMommy27
Good chapter you should so finish this story so please update it soon. would like to see what else happens in this story
12/3/2008 c1 611Ghostwriter
Good premise, I have a certain fondness for Trory, but you need to work on your formatting and separate your paragraphs. I would like to see more of this. Catch ya on the flip side.
2/5/2008 c1 patricia
shortest chapter ever but cant wait to see what happens UPDATE SOON
9/24/2007 c1 1Curley-Q
good
9/22/2007 c1 1Nicole Katherine
update ASAP!
9/22/2007 c1 Elbereth-Elentari
Really cool start.

I'm curious to read what happens next.

So...update soon ;o)
9/21/2007 c1 GG FAN
Can't wait for more!

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