for My Life Now5/26/2014 c16 Goose
LOL, you know good and well Harry wouldn't pull some retarded OOC nonsense like this. Lord god, why cant people just write mature stories?
LOL, you know good and well Harry wouldn't pull some retarded OOC nonsense like this. Lord god, why cant people just write mature stories?
3/31/2011 c2 
6mccabbages
You have a lot of mistakes. Commas and punctuation issues makes it hard to read...kind of gave me a headache. You should get a beat reader... I dont think I've been a member for a month yet though, otherwise I'd he available. You have a great plot and everything, but for me the punctuation kind of ruined it for me. :/ Just keep working, it took time or me to get to the skill level I'm at with my writing.
6mccabbagesYou have a lot of mistakes. Commas and punctuation issues makes it hard to read...kind of gave me a headache. You should get a beat reader... I dont think I've been a member for a month yet though, otherwise I'd he available. You have a great plot and everything, but for me the punctuation kind of ruined it for me. :/ Just keep working, it took time or me to get to the skill level I'm at with my writing.
12/4/2009 c6 hogwartsismydrug
good story line! i know that it is complete but i think you should have a beta look at it and repost it! that would be awesome
Alex
good story line! i know that it is complete but i think you should have a beta look at it and repost it! that would be awesome
Alex
5/13/2009 c17 NoLongerAMember2009
loved it, been reading your story most the afternoon and i've really enjoyed reading it (= xx
loved it, been reading your story most the afternoon and i've really enjoyed reading it (= xx
4/4/2008 c17 8Sympathetic Me
Well they got there Happily ever after, and i adore the ending. Over all there were small mistakes through out the stor but you made up for with the catual story. I think this story is brilliant. Exellent job.
8Sympathetic MeWell they got there Happily ever after, and i adore the ending. Over all there were small mistakes through out the stor but you made up for with the catual story. I think this story is brilliant. Exellent job.
4/4/2008 c16 Sympathetic Me
Well i wouldn't stop reading it. I am enjoying it and with me cetain characters have to be in a certain light or the writer has to be good or the story enjoyable or i will just hate the story, i won't feel the emotions like i like to when reading and i will hate characters but i can honestly say that i can feel the emotions. So Good work. God it feels weird saying it to someone older than me... LOL
Well i wouldn't stop reading it. I am enjoying it and with me cetain characters have to be in a certain light or the writer has to be good or the story enjoyable or i will just hate the story, i won't feel the emotions like i like to when reading and i will hate characters but i can honestly say that i can feel the emotions. So Good work. God it feels weird saying it to someone older than me... LOL
4/4/2008 c15 Sympathetic Me
AMAZING! BUT i hate most of the Weasley's in this story just to point that out. but loving it.
AMAZING! BUT i hate most of the Weasley's in this story just to point that out. but loving it.
4/4/2008 c14 Sympathetic Me
OMFG! I LOVE IT! AMAZING! WICKED! there are loads of words going through my head and there all good apart ones about The Weasley family and Harry.
OMFG! I LOVE IT! AMAZING! WICKED! there are loads of words going through my head and there all good apart ones about The Weasley family and Harry.
4/4/2008 c13 Sympathetic Me
Me yet again. I really like. Well i am now going to keep my reviews short. :} so i live it. {:
Me yet again. I really like. Well i am now going to keep my reviews short. :} so i live it. {:
4/4/2008 c12 Sympathetic Me
It's nice to know her friends care about her. Well Harry Potter is offically a ass hole. He can't barge into someones home and treat them like that. Well i'm to off to see the wizard, The wonderful wizard of oz. SOS got it stuck in my head, but i don't know why, haven't seen the movie in years. I'm off to read the next chapter.
It's nice to know her friends care about her. Well Harry Potter is offically a ass hole. He can't barge into someones home and treat them like that. Well i'm to off to see the wizard, The wonderful wizard of oz. SOS got it stuck in my head, but i don't know why, haven't seen the movie in years. I'm off to read the next chapter.
4/4/2008 c11 Sympathetic Me
AWW, so sweet. That was so romantic, i like it that he went to her meeting to see how it wen tbut i like it. It keeps gettign btter and better.:}
AWW, so sweet. That was so romantic, i like it that he went to her meeting to see how it wen tbut i like it. It keeps gettign btter and better.:}
4/4/2008 c10 Sympathetic Me
HAHAHA, That was funny, i would pay to see that. Well i love it even more now, i would tell you to keep it up but i think you will since your stories are wicked. :)
HAHAHA, That was funny, i would pay to see that. Well i love it even more now, i would tell you to keep it up but i think you will since your stories are wicked. :)
4/4/2008 c9 Sympathetic Me
I still love it, what a ass, treat her like dirt then boss her around he has no right to do that. Well i am hooked. A couple of mistakes but nothing big.
Love Fran
I still love it, what a ass, treat her like dirt then boss her around he has no right to do that. Well i am hooked. A couple of mistakes but nothing big.
Love Fran
4/4/2008 c7 Sympathetic Me
7 Reviews to one story in a row, i've never done that before... LOL. Well i am still loving it. Can't wait to read more. Well i am going to read more ;]
7 Reviews to one story in a row, i've never done that before... LOL. Well i am still loving it. Can't wait to read more. Well i am going to read more ;]