11/27/2014 c1 20ShyHinaCham
Hehehe that was a very cute one shot!
Those b******(girls) got what they deserve.
Good job!
Hehehe that was a very cute one shot!
Those b******(girls) got what they deserve.
Good job!
11/3/2014 c1 20dyingaswespeak2
This made me laugh a whole bunch. I really enjoyed this. :)
Thank you for the read!
This made me laugh a whole bunch. I really enjoyed this. :)
Thank you for the read!
8/2/2013 c1 1Uzumaki Akira
Loved the story! Only thing Naruto was a Hugeeee OOC!
But anyway the fic was awesome! :D
Loved the story! Only thing Naruto was a Hugeeee OOC!
But anyway the fic was awesome! :D
12/28/2012 c1 Hannah 56789
the fashion show was great please write more please write more about the fashion show okay bye
the fashion show was great please write more please write more about the fashion show okay bye
8/23/2012 c1 11birthdaychat
LOL! Your story was freaking hilarious! I was laughing the entire time, oh my gosh! LOVED THIS :D
LOL! Your story was freaking hilarious! I was laughing the entire time, oh my gosh! LOVED THIS :D
7/20/2012 c1 16Aimii0
It was very good, but if you'll keep writing like a script (I mean the way you write, Naruto: I'm very happy) a person that works for the site will see and it may delete your stories :) Just though I should tell you since it's a rule that says "Don't write your stories like a script.", and since I used to write like this too, my story was almost deleted.
It was very good, but if you'll keep writing like a script (I mean the way you write, Naruto: I'm very happy) a person that works for the site will see and it may delete your stories :) Just though I should tell you since it's a rule that says "Don't write your stories like a script.", and since I used to write like this too, my story was almost deleted.
7/23/2011 c1 Emmaya
I love this story! I love how Hinata is so confident! Also at the end when TenTen gets a hicky from Neji!
I love this story! I love how Hinata is so confident! Also at the end when TenTen gets a hicky from Neji!
5/19/2011 c1 k.shirley
The story is so cute!
I like the way u write abt them^^
But I feel that the girls are too bold^^
But I still like this story^^
The story is so cute!
I like the way u write abt them^^
But I feel that the girls are too bold^^
But I still like this story^^