for A Mean Old Man12/28/2020 c1 ArkhCthuul
One onenhand, could have done with much more. Detail.
On the other, really funny bunny...
One onenhand, could have done with much more. Detail.
On the other, really funny bunny...
1/18/2015 c1 
49Thescarredman
Beautiful exposition. I'm thinking this must be a crossover of some sort, though, so maybe you should tag it as such and update the character list. Even not knowing who these two originally were, I found their stories engaging. Thank you for this strange but lovely backstory.
Makes me look very differently at 'War Stories,' and especially the "Take me, sir. Take me hard," scene.
49ThescarredmanBeautiful exposition. I'm thinking this must be a crossover of some sort, though, so maybe you should tag it as such and update the character list. Even not knowing who these two originally were, I found their stories engaging. Thank you for this strange but lovely backstory.
Makes me look very differently at 'War Stories,' and especially the "Take me, sir. Take me hard," scene.
1/28/2011 c1 6abelard
Wow, this is soooooo creative and actually works in terms of the crossover. I usually detest crossover fics but this one is just so right on. Excellent!
6abelardWow, this is soooooo creative and actually works in terms of the crossover. I usually detest crossover fics but this one is just so right on. Excellent!
2/11/2010 c1 tranquilium
very nice story, though Inara can also be added since she played the Orici in the Stargate series.
very nice story, though Inara can also be added since she played the Orici in the Stargate series.
2/17/2009 c1 28The Die Hard
HAH! That was really cute. And funny, in a very bizarre way. And perfectly appropriate that River could freak out even two such as they. And by the way, I love your collection of quotes in your intro. Very, hm, revealing. (wink)
28The Die HardHAH! That was really cute. And funny, in a very bizarre way. And perfectly appropriate that River could freak out even two such as they. And by the way, I love your collection of quotes in your intro. Very, hm, revealing. (wink)
10/2/2007 c1 19NicolinaN
Ah! That was the coolest. :D I haven't even seen Angel, but I get the concept. I agree with the others, you really made this work, it's bloody believable.
Nic.
19NicolinaNAh! That was the coolest. :D I haven't even seen Angel, but I get the concept. I agree with the others, you really made this work, it's bloody believable.
Nic.
9/27/2007 c1 4meepscrawler
Sweet! I love this one! And I love Caleb! And Jasmine! And Marcus Hamilton! And Firefly! SO this fic is perfect for me. Please keep going!
4meepscrawlerSweet! I love this one! And I love Caleb! And Jasmine! And Marcus Hamilton! And Firefly! SO this fic is perfect for me. Please keep going!
9/25/2007 c1 jackie
Wow. This was really good. I liked how you made everything, fit. Terrific job! This could also be the start of a really interesting series... I would love to see how you would make Marcus fit in there.
Wow. This was really good. I liked how you made everything, fit. Terrific job! This could also be the start of a really interesting series... I would love to see how you would make Marcus fit in there.
9/25/2007 c1 10GAKDragonMCB
I thought this was a very interesting take on the other roles of the actors. And I agree with the previous reveiwer. This needs a one-shot to explain the bit with Jayne & "legal lore" - is River comparing him to Marcus Hamilton? Or is Jayne Cobb really someone else?
10GAKDragonMCBI thought this was a very interesting take on the other roles of the actors. And I agree with the previous reveiwer. This needs a one-shot to explain the bit with Jayne & "legal lore" - is River comparing him to Marcus Hamilton? Or is Jayne Cobb really someone else?