for Second Chance12/25/2016 c1 
30SSJ-Jolt
You could have reached the same conclusion for the beam weapons with a fraction of the work by simply researching other Gundam series... where beam weapons are all described as particle accelerators with the rare exceptions of actual lasers. Which is also why beam weapons even have barrels at all; the field in the barrels helps shape and direct the particle stream as it's fired.
30SSJ-JoltYou could have reached the same conclusion for the beam weapons with a fraction of the work by simply researching other Gundam series... where beam weapons are all described as particle accelerators with the rare exceptions of actual lasers. Which is also why beam weapons even have barrels at all; the field in the barrels helps shape and direct the particle stream as it's fired.
3/12/2015 c5 Axcel
This was very good! Very touching and with a likeable Fllay!
This was very good! Very touching and with a likeable Fllay!
1/23/2015 c5 6Crimson-Hybrid
Alright, my actual review.
First of all, you really amazed me with the effort you put in researching medicine and quantum physics/astrophysics/science stuff to make the story realistic and believable. It shows how dedicated you are to this little masterpiece and that's great.
Second, I like your writing style! Especially the Mobile Suit battle scenes. Very detailed, but not too much that it hinders the flow of the action.
Third, Roger. Have I mentioned how I like his character? His scenes are short, but he really shines in those little moments.
I'll be looking forward to your future fics. Have a great year!
-Crimson
6Crimson-HybridAlright, my actual review.
First of all, you really amazed me with the effort you put in researching medicine and quantum physics/astrophysics/science stuff to make the story realistic and believable. It shows how dedicated you are to this little masterpiece and that's great.
Second, I like your writing style! Especially the Mobile Suit battle scenes. Very detailed, but not too much that it hinders the flow of the action.
Third, Roger. Have I mentioned how I like his character? His scenes are short, but he really shines in those little moments.
I'll be looking forward to your future fics. Have a great year!
-Crimson
1/23/2015 c4 Crimson-Hybrid
I was going to leave a review when I had finished the entire story altogether, but I just had to comment on Roger. He's the kind of OC that... how can I put it- he sticks around; the man isn't easy to forget. In fact, I think I like him already, ha ha!
Well, one last chapter and you'll be hearing from me again. Until then! :)
- Crimson
I was going to leave a review when I had finished the entire story altogether, but I just had to comment on Roger. He's the kind of OC that... how can I put it- he sticks around; the man isn't easy to forget. In fact, I think I like him already, ha ha!
Well, one last chapter and you'll be hearing from me again. Until then! :)
- Crimson
10/23/2013 c1 9Graf Eisen III
Actually, while the gamma rays fired by GENESIS are invisible, the 'beam' we see in the show is actually interstellar gases being excited by the passage of the gamma rays.
9Graf Eisen IIIActually, while the gamma rays fired by GENESIS are invisible, the 'beam' we see in the show is actually interstellar gases being excited by the passage of the gamma rays.
11/20/2012 c5 39Love Psycho
Honestly...Flay/Kira isn't my favourite pairing...but you sold it well here, so I guess I know have to put it on my list of "pairings I like" because it's so sweet here. I honestly only read this because I saw it was the prequel to Gundam SEED Evolution...I don't regret it at all.
-hands over platter- Magic cookies for you!
39Love PsychoHonestly...Flay/Kira isn't my favourite pairing...but you sold it well here, so I guess I know have to put it on my list of "pairings I like" because it's so sweet here. I honestly only read this because I saw it was the prequel to Gundam SEED Evolution...I don't regret it at all.
-hands over platter- Magic cookies for you!
6/28/2012 c5 36Nanya
I always did like Kira/Fllay more than Lacus/Kira myself.
So, I enjoyed this fic. Good job. _
36NanyaI always did like Kira/Fllay more than Lacus/Kira myself.
So, I enjoyed this fic. Good job. _
11/28/2011 c5 6EpyonZero23
This is among THE best Kira x Flay fics I've read. Your attention to details is really something. Especially on the Sci-Fi and Medical end. Story narration is solid and you've paid careful notice on how the characters were depicted.
Loose ends surrounding Kira and Lacus were tied near the end. And I like the subtle way on how the Kira and Flay romance was handled. Well, the show didn't do justice on Flay's character, but I'd vote for this ending if it was an option.
Thanks for sharing and completing such a wonderful story.
It gives a very satisfying feeling.
6EpyonZero23This is among THE best Kira x Flay fics I've read. Your attention to details is really something. Especially on the Sci-Fi and Medical end. Story narration is solid and you've paid careful notice on how the characters were depicted.
Loose ends surrounding Kira and Lacus were tied near the end. And I like the subtle way on how the Kira and Flay romance was handled. Well, the show didn't do justice on Flay's character, but I'd vote for this ending if it was an option.
Thanks for sharing and completing such a wonderful story.
It gives a very satisfying feeling.
9/13/2010 c1 Mejii
dont listen to those mean ass punks...
like that "i dunno my name squinty eyes"...
or gemini ass twins...
u've already said that this isn't for flay haters...
are they disobedient or just plain stupid that they cant even understand a simple english instruction...
ugghhhhh...
ANYWAYS...
awesome fic!
if u need support or a little lift when ur flamed...
uhmmmm
my deviant art is (damn it i cant log in)
well mejii13.deviantart.com
just ask if u want my facebook account...
GO FLAY!
sorry i just really loveee fllay...
arent i annoying?
ahahahaha
i dont hate flay haters though...
dont listen to those mean ass punks...
like that "i dunno my name squinty eyes"...
or gemini ass twins...
u've already said that this isn't for flay haters...
are they disobedient or just plain stupid that they cant even understand a simple english instruction...
ugghhhhh...
ANYWAYS...
awesome fic!
if u need support or a little lift when ur flamed...
uhmmmm
my deviant art is (damn it i cant log in)
well mejii13.deviantart.com
just ask if u want my facebook account...
GO FLAY!
sorry i just really loveee fllay...
arent i annoying?
ahahahaha
i dont hate flay haters though...
8/16/2009 c1 Gemini Prayer
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I would KILL FLAYY!
You to Kira!
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I would KILL FLAYY!
You to Kira!
7/6/2009 c1 1Peloponnese
Well, that last bit's a bit technical for me, but I'm glad that someone was willing to go through the trouble of research for the benefit of the reader. Good job.
-G. Wagers
1PeloponneseWell, that last bit's a bit technical for me, but I'm glad that someone was willing to go through the trouble of research for the benefit of the reader. Good job.
-G. Wagers
6/9/2009 c5 10kleptographer of alternates
Excellent! I love how you tried to be scientifically accurate in this fic.
10kleptographer of alternatesExcellent! I love how you tried to be scientifically accurate in this fic.
6/5/2009 c2 7I-don't-know-my-name4
KiraLacus belongs together. If Mitsuo did this, I would Falcon punch him to death and rewrite the story.
7I-don't-know-my-name4KiraLacus belongs together. If Mitsuo did this, I would Falcon punch him to death and rewrite the story.