for Second Chance10/4/2007 c4 
16Magus1108
This seems pretty good. Though I do like Kira/Lacus better, I like this pairing as well. As long as you don't have Lacus/Athrun, I'll continue to keep reading it. Update soon please.
16Magus1108This seems pretty good. Though I do like Kira/Lacus better, I like this pairing as well. As long as you don't have Lacus/Athrun, I'll continue to keep reading it. Update soon please.
10/2/2007 c4 Knives91
If your definition of screwing up is doing a great job, then yup, you failed miserably...
Bad joke, but I couldn't resist. Great writing. Continue the work.
PS: rather informative author note by the way
If your definition of screwing up is doing a great job, then yup, you failed miserably...
Bad joke, but I couldn't resist. Great writing. Continue the work.
PS: rather informative author note by the way
10/2/2007 c4 7Zidane Lightning Saix
As a matter of fact, the explanation about Flay's survival in here is pretty much accurate, and since in CE you can patch almost everything thanks to the technology on the PLANT's, cell's regen is not so out of the question (Yzak took off that deep scar of his face)
Maybe Kira must place himself in the shoes of the EAF or ZAFT pilots that he normally diable to think about his own actions.
Now, the main issue here is how Kira is going to do with Flay in his right and Lacus in his left.
7Zidane Lightning SaixAs a matter of fact, the explanation about Flay's survival in here is pretty much accurate, and since in CE you can patch almost everything thanks to the technology on the PLANT's, cell's regen is not so out of the question (Yzak took off that deep scar of his face)
Maybe Kira must place himself in the shoes of the EAF or ZAFT pilots that he normally diable to think about his own actions.
Now, the main issue here is how Kira is going to do with Flay in his right and Lacus in his left.
10/2/2007 c4 3Scarlet Troll
Hihi,I think I like this Roger, he's funny.
I really liked how you explained how Fllay survived and all that. You did well =D
Please update soon!
3Scarlet TrollHihi,I think I like this Roger, he's funny.
I really liked how you explained how Fllay survived and all that. You did well =D
Please update soon!
10/2/2007 c4 9NoshMono
Hello. I saw this fic few days ago but only today do I get around to leave a review. Having to type on a movable keyboard and watch the text on a 3.5 inch screen does give the incentive to be lazy, I guess. But here goes.
It's not really negative, but I think it would be better if you don't apologize for this story being a Kira x Flay story. I like apple pies and I don't apologize for liking them. The same case applies to you. FF is a forum for ideas to blossom and if someone else doesn't have the open mind to accept them, or at least the courtesy to keep quiet about it, well... On the plus side, you're being polite is something commendable.
Now, storywise, it's good read as I can see that all of your chapters have poignant or interesting scene. Keep it up! Also I do like the detail on how Flay surviving is bing explained. It's certainly better than the one I used. Yes, we always assume that being in space vacuum will freeze us. The misconception is probably due to the fact that as we climb higher and higher on earth, it becomes colder and colder. One of the reasons is that the air at that level lost their energy compared to the closer to the sea. But in space, where the air is basically almost nonexistent, it's a bit different.
In fact, to elaborate on the point you made, one of the major problems that NASA and other space agencies have to tackle is the regulation of heat being produced by all the machineries and computers. Unlike on Earth where heat can just be released into the atmosphere, the same thing cannot be done in space of the state of vacuum.
As for the medical progress, I think that would explain nicely how Fllaga managed to survive to make his appearance in Destiny. Not to nitpick or anything, but I do think his circumstance was more severe than Flay's. Yeah, being blown to bits blocking a positron shot do look more dangerous compared to being blown to bits inside a shuttle.
Oh well, keep up the good work and hope to see from you soon.
9NoshMonoHello. I saw this fic few days ago but only today do I get around to leave a review. Having to type on a movable keyboard and watch the text on a 3.5 inch screen does give the incentive to be lazy, I guess. But here goes.
It's not really negative, but I think it would be better if you don't apologize for this story being a Kira x Flay story. I like apple pies and I don't apologize for liking them. The same case applies to you. FF is a forum for ideas to blossom and if someone else doesn't have the open mind to accept them, or at least the courtesy to keep quiet about it, well... On the plus side, you're being polite is something commendable.
Now, storywise, it's good read as I can see that all of your chapters have poignant or interesting scene. Keep it up! Also I do like the detail on how Flay surviving is bing explained. It's certainly better than the one I used. Yes, we always assume that being in space vacuum will freeze us. The misconception is probably due to the fact that as we climb higher and higher on earth, it becomes colder and colder. One of the reasons is that the air at that level lost their energy compared to the closer to the sea. But in space, where the air is basically almost nonexistent, it's a bit different.
In fact, to elaborate on the point you made, one of the major problems that NASA and other space agencies have to tackle is the regulation of heat being produced by all the machineries and computers. Unlike on Earth where heat can just be released into the atmosphere, the same thing cannot be done in space of the state of vacuum.
As for the medical progress, I think that would explain nicely how Fllaga managed to survive to make his appearance in Destiny. Not to nitpick or anything, but I do think his circumstance was more severe than Flay's. Yeah, being blown to bits blocking a positron shot do look more dangerous compared to being blown to bits inside a shuttle.
Oh well, keep up the good work and hope to see from you soon.
10/2/2007 c4 bloodyknight85
'Hey, it's cool... This is a fitting chapter... You have brought out whatever i think you want to bring out... It's cool... and precise as well... But i don't see you bringing out some of the feelings from either other characters or Kira himself... Fllay since she cannot talk or even make a face, i cannot say too much about her... But overall, it's cool... for someone who did this for the first time... I don't even think i myself can achieve that status... You can go check out my fic... You'll see... And i suppose Fllay will have a full recovery or something... That Dagger pilot though... He might be very serious about finding Kira and taking revenge for what he has done to him... Well, Kira's being stupid to tell him that just now... What a fool he is, i guess... Perhaps he isn't just any ordinary human around us... He is after all a Ultimate Coordinator, am i right?'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'Hey, it's cool... This is a fitting chapter... You have brought out whatever i think you want to bring out... It's cool... and precise as well... But i don't see you bringing out some of the feelings from either other characters or Kira himself... Fllay since she cannot talk or even make a face, i cannot say too much about her... But overall, it's cool... for someone who did this for the first time... I don't even think i myself can achieve that status... You can go check out my fic... You'll see... And i suppose Fllay will have a full recovery or something... That Dagger pilot though... He might be very serious about finding Kira and taking revenge for what he has done to him... Well, Kira's being stupid to tell him that just now... What a fool he is, i guess... Perhaps he isn't just any ordinary human around us... He is after all a Ultimate Coordinator, am i right?'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
10/1/2007 c4 25Athyra
I'm a kiraxLacus fan but I'm not opposed to KiraxFllay either =)
And i ahve to sya your fic is very well researched and I can't wait to see what happens next.
25AthyraI'm a kiraxLacus fan but I'm not opposed to KiraxFllay either =)
And i ahve to sya your fic is very well researched and I can't wait to see what happens next.
10/1/2007 c4 19nick2951
Actually, what you did was very believable. I think you did a very good job in explaining how she survived. Excellent chapter and I am looking forward to the next, it will be interesting to see how the two go from here.
19nick2951Actually, what you did was very believable. I think you did a very good job in explaining how she survived. Excellent chapter and I am looking forward to the next, it will be interesting to see how the two go from here.
10/1/2007 c4 2Irui
XD i noe. i love the name Kari; another way to know it's an anagram of Kira: switch the 'ira' to 'ari' (ie. switch it around)
ive always thought of giving a Kira-Fllay daughter the name Kari (with Fllay hair color and Kira' eyes -eyes twinkles with stars anime style-); IT'S UTSUKUSHII...ne ne Kari Yamato or...Kari Hibiki -squeals in joy-
ok ok ill stop. _ i get the point: READ THE STORY.
-reading in progress-
/quote/“Some jackass in a G-weapon blew the gun-arm and head off my Dagger,” he said with a grimace.
-much later-
“Oh, and I’m sorry about what I did to your Dagger.” With that, Kira left the infirmary/end quote/
LOL
aw! I like Houko Kuwashima's voice!
/quote/Kira saw her moving her free hand, and he reached out and interlaced his fingers with hers. Fllay shut her eyes, and Kira leaned over and laid his head on her shoulder, and was finally able to fall asleep./end quote/
kawaii o.m.g. so sweet ^.^
~Luna (Irui)
2IruiXD i noe. i love the name Kari; another way to know it's an anagram of Kira: switch the 'ira' to 'ari' (ie. switch it around)
ive always thought of giving a Kira-Fllay daughter the name Kari (with Fllay hair color and Kira' eyes -eyes twinkles with stars anime style-); IT'S UTSUKUSHII...ne ne Kari Yamato or...Kari Hibiki -squeals in joy-
ok ok ill stop. _ i get the point: READ THE STORY.
-reading in progress-
/quote/“Some jackass in a G-weapon blew the gun-arm and head off my Dagger,” he said with a grimace.
-much later-
“Oh, and I’m sorry about what I did to your Dagger.” With that, Kira left the infirmary/end quote/
LOL
aw! I like Houko Kuwashima's voice!
/quote/Kira saw her moving her free hand, and he reached out and interlaced his fingers with hers. Fllay shut her eyes, and Kira leaned over and laid his head on her shoulder, and was finally able to fall asleep./end quote/
kawaii o.m.g. so sweet ^.^
~Luna (Irui)
9/30/2007 c3 bloodyknight85
'Hey, wait... Didn't i read that Fllay will survive in this fic? I only see her being fried... What's up with that? This is just one part of your fic... Where's the other, man? Where is Fllay? I want to see her alive! Why didn't i see her alive? She's so beautiful... So nice... So good to eat... So good to... you know what i mean... Why? Let her live! Why did you still let her die? Why! (Please be warned that the above is not reviewed by me... Someone from outer space writes this after seeing the last episode of Gundam SEED... I can see his eyes attracted by Fllay's beauty... That's why he is doing this right now... Forgive him since this is the first time he ever saw an anime and read about one... I sincerely apologize...)'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'Hey, wait... Didn't i read that Fllay will survive in this fic? I only see her being fried... What's up with that? This is just one part of your fic... Where's the other, man? Where is Fllay? I want to see her alive! Why didn't i see her alive? She's so beautiful... So nice... So good to eat... So good to... you know what i mean... Why? Let her live! Why did you still let her die? Why! (Please be warned that the above is not reviewed by me... Someone from outer space writes this after seeing the last episode of Gundam SEED... I can see his eyes attracted by Fllay's beauty... That's why he is doing this right now... Forgive him since this is the first time he ever saw an anime and read about one... I sincerely apologize...)'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
9/29/2007 c1 bloodyknight85
'Oh man... He still die... Yes, i do agree that he did the impossible to save Archangel... He also did the impossible to survive the attack... and done the impossible again to become Earth Alliance dog... and again to change his identity to Neo Roanoke... and did the impossible again to remembre who he is and did the expected to reunite with Murrue... Well, i think that is something Murrue have been hoping for when she realizes he is dead but discover later he still alive but forget who she is and then remember again... Quite a rollercoaster ride indeed, i must say... And it seems that the habit of his has influenced Fllay as well... How did she survive, i wonder? I would be reading it soon, i suppose...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'Oh man... He still die... Yes, i do agree that he did the impossible to save Archangel... He also did the impossible to survive the attack... and done the impossible again to become Earth Alliance dog... and again to change his identity to Neo Roanoke... and did the impossible again to remembre who he is and did the expected to reunite with Murrue... Well, i think that is something Murrue have been hoping for when she realizes he is dead but discover later he still alive but forget who she is and then remember again... Quite a rollercoaster ride indeed, i must say... And it seems that the habit of his has influenced Fllay as well... How did she survive, i wonder? I would be reading it soon, i suppose...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!