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9/27/2007 c3 backlash5
Nice job, I like what you've done with the first three chapters in tems of telling the story. The idea of going from a novel type to a fanfic type might work. please up date soon
9/27/2007 c3 19nick2951
A very good start to your fic, I am looking forward to what you have planned for the next chapter and am curious to see how Fllay survived. As long as this is a K/F fic, you have my attention!

Update soon!
9/27/2007 c3 2Irui
/quote/A pop star in command of a warship, he thought, shaking his head. /end quote/

LOL; yea, very ironic and funny XD

/quote/ “I’ve always liked her songs.” /end quote/

i thought it was "your songs" since he had said "kimi..."

YAY! NEXT EPISODE i mean CHAPTER will be a brand new beautiful chappie.

Update soon!

~Irui
9/27/2007 c2 Irui
i hope it's A too.

it's cute how you connected her thoughts to the past when the shuttle/lifepod was exploding.

Besides it's alright; no matter how many times i watched that episode, i can't help but tear and nearly cry. =(

~Irui
9/27/2007 c1 Irui
There's not always a second chance in life ne?

dam reading this event again makes me think of the music that was set for it, playing again (and Lacus' speech about mankind)

-moving on to next chappie^^-

~Irui
9/27/2007 c2 Knives91
All I can say is, "Hell hath no fury like an angry Kira Yamato."

Keep it up
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