for Back In The Saddle10/9/2007 c1 BrittanyLS
Why couldn't the reunion have gone like this? It would have saved a lot of trouble!
Why couldn't the reunion have gone like this? It would have saved a lot of trouble!
10/4/2007 c1 berarch
I liked the story, but I have two general comments, not entirely directed at you. One being that I was halfway rooting for Catherine in this episode and wouldn't have minded a little fling there. Harm was a hurt guy, and I liked him & CG together. I know, that's very sacreligious and I feel bad saying it, but there was just something about her. Maybe I think DJE looks good with a blonde on his arm. :) The other comment is that it sort of bothers me when ff's have Harm suddenly start calling her Sarah... it bothers me because the only time he ever really used her real name was when he couldn't express how he was feeling, so he just let the word speak for itself and reveal his deep emotions. When he actually opens up and talks, it's back to Mac, because she is his Mac... "Sarah" just doens't feel comfortable coming form his lips unless there's a grandma or a Steerman involved. :) Besides, Dalton and Mic and Webb called her Sarah.
I liked the story, but I have two general comments, not entirely directed at you. One being that I was halfway rooting for Catherine in this episode and wouldn't have minded a little fling there. Harm was a hurt guy, and I liked him & CG together. I know, that's very sacreligious and I feel bad saying it, but there was just something about her. Maybe I think DJE looks good with a blonde on his arm. :) The other comment is that it sort of bothers me when ff's have Harm suddenly start calling her Sarah... it bothers me because the only time he ever really used her real name was when he couldn't express how he was feeling, so he just let the word speak for itself and reveal his deep emotions. When he actually opens up and talks, it's back to Mac, because she is his Mac... "Sarah" just doens't feel comfortable coming form his lips unless there's a grandma or a Steerman involved. :) Besides, Dalton and Mic and Webb called her Sarah.
10/4/2007 c1 
1GermanJagaholic
What? i mean, nice story, just way too short... and they undressed themselves? i mean, they're having sex for the first time, really rushed into it and then mac is undressing herself and harm is undressing himself? aw come on girl, give me more... *giggles*
1GermanJagaholicWhat? i mean, nice story, just way too short... and they undressed themselves? i mean, they're having sex for the first time, really rushed into it and then mac is undressing herself and harm is undressing himself? aw come on girl, give me more... *giggles*
10/3/2007 c1 Acer
Nice story! :)
Nice story! :)
10/3/2007 c1 3Megs-3
Oh, I have to admit that I like this version much, much better! Stupid Catherine Gale...not that I really have anything against her, but it was certainly an inopportune time for her to show up! But then again, knowing Harm and Mac, they probably would have somehow screwed it up anyway! Great job - I love the last line - "In the end, they were both physically and emotionally on top of the world."
3Megs-3Oh, I have to admit that I like this version much, much better! Stupid Catherine Gale...not that I really have anything against her, but it was certainly an inopportune time for her to show up! But then again, knowing Harm and Mac, they probably would have somehow screwed it up anyway! Great job - I love the last line - "In the end, they were both physically and emotionally on top of the world."