for The Final Goodbye4/15/2011 c1 
23Morning Lilies
Oh! I didn't suck! It's a very nice idea! I like your view on things! :D
23Morning LiliesOh! I didn't suck! It's a very nice idea! I like your view on things! :D
10/4/2007 c1 107Shizuku Tsukishima749
OOH, good job!
Your periods and quotation marks need a bit of work (there WERE no quotation marks when Ron or Hermione spoke), but other than that, it was cool!
I already told you I loved it to death, but I'll just say it again: LOVE THIS, DUDE! ^U^ I especially love what you added to Ginny's last sentence, "'...Even though all the signs were there.'" That was BEAUTIFUL, along with the "'Goodbye, Harry Potter'" line! I am getting SICK of the 'I didn't know if he'd/she'd feel the same way', same old, same old, boring crud, so to see something a bit more refreshing like your ending line was AWESOME! THANK YOU!
I understand there may be no other way to get your point across, but come on, originality is what we're DYING for, you know? Oy.
You hit the spot, though; that was GOOD! Can't WAIT to read your other stories (your Greg/Sarah one was COOL too!)! Keep up the great work! ^U^ *U*
Sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)
107Shizuku Tsukishima749OOH, good job!
Your periods and quotation marks need a bit of work (there WERE no quotation marks when Ron or Hermione spoke), but other than that, it was cool!
I already told you I loved it to death, but I'll just say it again: LOVE THIS, DUDE! ^U^ I especially love what you added to Ginny's last sentence, "'...Even though all the signs were there.'" That was BEAUTIFUL, along with the "'Goodbye, Harry Potter'" line! I am getting SICK of the 'I didn't know if he'd/she'd feel the same way', same old, same old, boring crud, so to see something a bit more refreshing like your ending line was AWESOME! THANK YOU!
I understand there may be no other way to get your point across, but come on, originality is what we're DYING for, you know? Oy.
You hit the spot, though; that was GOOD! Can't WAIT to read your other stories (your Greg/Sarah one was COOL too!)! Keep up the great work! ^U^ *U*
Sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)