for The Next Step3/15/2010 c1 twilight-is-lovee
Cute. I would read the long story, but you haven't completed it, and considering you haven't updated in over a year...
Cute. I would read the long story, but you haven't completed it, and considering you haven't updated in over a year...
5/9/2009 c1 
1EdwardLovesBella02
haha that was really cute! Do you have an idea on when you will possibly update the AWESOME Blue Moon? I am really anxious to read more!
1EdwardLovesBella02haha that was really cute! Do you have an idea on when you will possibly update the AWESOME Blue Moon? I am really anxious to read more!
1/8/2009 c1 mscope
Can't help but smile at this one. Haven't read "the big one" yet but looking forward to it. I don't know? ... Would Alice tell Bella if she saw the outcome?
Can't help but smile at this one. Haven't read "the big one" yet but looking forward to it. I don't know? ... Would Alice tell Bella if she saw the outcome?
5/21/2008 c1 lemon-of-the-tent
(mine.)
Check my previous comments on your other two entries to get the jist of my commenting stlye.
Actually, I usually give more constructive criticism in comments, but these are short and good so there's not much to type.
(mine.)
Check my previous comments on your other two entries to get the jist of my commenting stlye.
Actually, I usually give more constructive criticism in comments, but these are short and good so there's not much to type.
12/13/2007 c1 27not done baking
I like the SATC reference, in fact any pop reference is pretty awesome.
I don't know if you had this problem in your other stories but when you're writing dialogue if there is supposed to be a period before the... quote-y thing than you use a comma.
“Sorry, can’t help you there,” she winked.
27not done bakingI like the SATC reference, in fact any pop reference is pretty awesome.
I don't know if you had this problem in your other stories but when you're writing dialogue if there is supposed to be a period before the... quote-y thing than you use a comma.
“Sorry, can’t help you there,” she winked.
12/13/2007 c1 9K-lin J
I like this idea a lot. Though I do not think I could write about the risky subject. I hope you will continue.
9K-lin JI like this idea a lot. Though I do not think I could write about the risky subject. I hope you will continue.
10/4/2007 c1 22purtyinpink71121
haha, great job, i liked it.
short and sweet =]
excellent work!
-Skye
22purtyinpink71121haha, great job, i liked it.
short and sweet =]
excellent work!
-Skye