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3/15/2010 c1 twilight-is-lovee
Cute. I would read the long story, but you haven't completed it, and considering you haven't updated in over a year...
9/13/2009 c1 VeNae
Are you going to finish Blue Moon over Manka. I am anxious to finish your story.
5/9/2009 c1 1EdwardLovesBella02
haha that was really cute! Do you have an idea on when you will possibly update the AWESOME Blue Moon? I am really anxious to read more!
1/8/2009 c1 mscope
Can't help but smile at this one. Haven't read "the big one" yet but looking forward to it. I don't know? ... Would Alice tell Bella if she saw the outcome?
11/6/2008 c1 omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway
hehehehe cute
10/27/2008 c1 Shstar
please write more
5/21/2008 c1 lemon-of-the-tent
(mine.)

Check my previous comments on your other two entries to get the jist of my commenting stlye.

Actually, I usually give more constructive criticism in comments, but these are short and good so there's not much to type.
12/13/2007 c1 27not done baking
I like the SATC reference, in fact any pop reference is pretty awesome.

I don't know if you had this problem in your other stories but when you're writing dialogue if there is supposed to be a period before the... quote-y thing than you use a comma.

“Sorry, can’t help you there,” she winked.
12/13/2007 c1 9K-lin J
I like this idea a lot. Though I do not think I could write about the risky subject. I hope you will continue.
10/6/2007 c1 5Booth'slittleanthropologist
hee hee hee!
10/4/2007 c1 22purtyinpink71121
haha, great job, i liked it.

short and sweet =]

excellent work!

-Skye

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