for Akira: Graveminds daugter10/20/2019 c2 Guest
You have problems in your head to fix before writing anymore of this story. Seriously no human being should have to read this if all your going to do is give every character glistening eyes the size of bean bags. Kill yourself you peppermint cunt.
You have problems in your head to fix before writing anymore of this story. Seriously no human being should have to read this if all your going to do is give every character glistening eyes the size of bean bags. Kill yourself you peppermint cunt.
11/8/2012 c3 
8flood grave
i took the story because i wanted you to continue but you put it up for adoption so if you want it back i let you have it or we can work together deal?
8flood gravei took the story because i wanted you to continue but you put it up for adoption so if you want it back i let you have it or we can work together deal?
12/22/2011 c3 Vampire emperor
if you do plan to continue this story may i sugjest if the crash sight must be in or around konaha try deep in the forst of death of if not try somewhere ferther away like near the border to suna or in the desert itself hope that helps with the wrieters block i look forward to see what comes of this story
if you do plan to continue this story may i sugjest if the crash sight must be in or around konaha try deep in the forst of death of if not try somewhere ferther away like near the border to suna or in the desert itself hope that helps with the wrieters block i look forward to see what comes of this story
2/19/2008 c2 5The Black Miroku
I have to say this is interesting, although the chapter's are short it makes up for it a little with the story, i'm looking forward to the the next chapter, Dinoboy...
The Black Miroku
5The Black MirokuI have to say this is interesting, although the chapter's are short it makes up for it a little with the story, i'm looking forward to the the next chapter, Dinoboy...
The Black Miroku
12/17/2007 c1 3shadowzerover5
Interesting to say the least. I not thoroughly familiar with the story of Halo however this story has potential, update soon.
3shadowzerover5Interesting to say the least. I not thoroughly familiar with the story of Halo however this story has potential, update soon.
11/2/2007 c1 xyunaleska
Its Uzumaki! ^^ Sorry if i seem very harsh but when i saw the different variations of 'Uzumaki' in your story, i thought i might tell you how to spell it ^^ I am not being mean! I like your story so...UPDATE OR ILL ...I'll...Uh...Hide your TV remote! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Its Uzumaki! ^^ Sorry if i seem very harsh but when i saw the different variations of 'Uzumaki' in your story, i thought i might tell you how to spell it ^^ I am not being mean! I like your story so...UPDATE OR ILL ...I'll...Uh...Hide your TV remote! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA