for Factory Juliet7/5/2010 c2 Cased In Darkness
This is an awesome twist combining Shakespeare and Tsubasa (other than the anime of the play which -in my opinion- played out quite nicely). I can't wait for the next chapter so update ASAP.
p.s. please don't allow this to end like the play
This is an awesome twist combining Shakespeare and Tsubasa (other than the anime of the play which -in my opinion- played out quite nicely). I can't wait for the next chapter so update ASAP.
p.s. please don't allow this to end like the play
2/25/2010 c2 
5Sightless Eyes
Please please please continue this , this story is 100% amazing , the way you wrote Yuui reminds me of myslef , a shattered Juilet ,so please miss update as soon as you can.
-From A Shattered Yuui-
5Sightless EyesPlease please please continue this , this story is 100% amazing , the way you wrote Yuui reminds me of myslef , a shattered Juilet ,so please miss update as soon as you can.
-From A Shattered Yuui-
10/30/2009 c2 EileenX
Cute! Shoulda commented earlier...This is a great fic! The problem is... You haven't updated for forever! Are you going to update or not? Well, just a reminder, PLEASE UPDATE! I expect to see another chapter by tommorrow(hopefully)! PLEASE UPDATE!
From,
Zoey(Your Fan!)
Cute! Shoulda commented earlier...This is a great fic! The problem is... You haven't updated for forever! Are you going to update or not? Well, just a reminder, PLEASE UPDATE! I expect to see another chapter by tommorrow(hopefully)! PLEASE UPDATE!
From,
Zoey(Your Fan!)
7/25/2009 c2 yuui-kun
SQUEE! so cute!
SQUEE! so cute!
7/18/2009 c2 5Fai'swingedchronicles
i hope they dont end up dieing T.T
its a sad chap since he had to leave but its also happy ^^
5Fai'swingedchroniclesi hope they dont end up dieing T.T
its a sad chap since he had to leave but its also happy ^^
6/28/2009 c2 SuperMangaFan89
This is really, really good!
Did Ashura already force himself onto Yuui, or is it just that gut feeling that Yuui got?
Please, hurry and make more!
This is really, really good!
Did Ashura already force himself onto Yuui, or is it just that gut feeling that Yuui got?
Please, hurry and make more!
6/27/2009 c2 5Foofmeister
You are a spectacular writer! I'm really quite jealous! You definitly have your own unique style and I love it! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for more!
5FoofmeisterYou are a spectacular writer! I'm really quite jealous! You definitly have your own unique style and I love it! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for more!
6/27/2009 c2 11Dirt-the-StoryBender
Wewt~! This is wonderful beyond words. I can't wait for more!
Really, please write more~!
11Dirt-the-StoryBenderWewt~! This is wonderful beyond words. I can't wait for more!
Really, please write more~!
6/20/2009 c1 ArcticBee
(didn't bother to log in x3)
This is very lovely, I like how you poetically describe it :o
poor Yuui...
Is it just coincidential that I saw a RomeoxJuliet advertisement when reading this? x3
(didn't bother to log in x3)
This is very lovely, I like how you poetically describe it :o
poor Yuui...
Is it just coincidential that I saw a RomeoxJuliet advertisement when reading this? x3
8/30/2008 c1 Melissa Brite
Love it so far. Keep writing.
Love it so far. Keep writing.
10/6/2007 c1 nolongeractivechan
Oh.
My.
Dear.
God!
So amazing! I love it! Its just so awesome! I can see why it took so long! So well written! So poetic! So beautiful! So amazing! So wonderful! I love this, and my juliet! XD -hint hint, nudge nudge :P-
Oh.
My.
Dear.
God!
So amazing! I love it! Its just so awesome! I can see why it took so long! So well written! So poetic! So beautiful! So amazing! So wonderful! I love this, and my juliet! XD -hint hint, nudge nudge :P-
10/5/2007 c1 Zee
I love the premise immensely and am definitely looking forward to more! Kurogane is so sweet in this and I absolutely love the setting to pieces!
A note on your grammar, though. There are some errors with your usage of your and their, etc.:
You only use "your" when you're being possessive: "your mother, your love, your day, etc." Oppositely, you only use "you're" when you want to substitute "you are." Likewise, "their" is possessive, "they're" is only used in place of they are, and "there" is like "over there, under there, right there" usually used to denote location.
I love the premise immensely and am definitely looking forward to more! Kurogane is so sweet in this and I absolutely love the setting to pieces!
A note on your grammar, though. There are some errors with your usage of your and their, etc.:
You only use "your" when you're being possessive: "your mother, your love, your day, etc." Oppositely, you only use "you're" when you want to substitute "you are." Likewise, "their" is possessive, "they're" is only used in place of they are, and "there" is like "over there, under there, right there" usually used to denote location.