for Last Straw6/13/2020 c2 CC
Keep up the story PLEASE Kagome must learn.
Keep up the story PLEASE Kagome must learn.
2/23/2019 c1 Petrie
Kagome is mean I don’t like her at all she is abusing Inuyasha but I must know what happens next
Kagome is mean I don’t like her at all she is abusing Inuyasha but I must know what happens next
48/19/2013 c1 Why
First of all,, Keep the canon characters in character. Personally I really can not stand it when a character is brought out of their character, I'm one of those people who believes that being true to the author's original design is important.
You are using an established character (Kagome) who is completely OOC
Kagome is demanding of Inu-Yasha sometimes, but not CONSTANTLY. hate when stories abuse the "osuwari." She says it when InuYasha has truley done something wrong, not for her enjoyment.
First of all,, Keep the canon characters in character. Personally I really can not stand it when a character is brought out of their character, I'm one of those people who believes that being true to the author's original design is important.
You are using an established character (Kagome) who is completely OOC
Kagome is demanding of Inu-Yasha sometimes, but not CONSTANTLY. hate when stories abuse the "osuwari." She says it when InuYasha has truley done something wrong, not for her enjoyment.
8/19/2013 c2 mystery
It was getting to the exciting part! You must continue plzzzzzzz I must know what happens next!
It was getting to the exciting part! You must continue plzzzzzzz I must know what happens next!
7/21/2013 c1 Guest
Update please
Update please