for Things Revealed4/25/2019 c1 Guestie
This so FUNNY! xD I like the way that Usagi screams at that bitch! xD hehehe!
This so FUNNY! xD I like the way that Usagi screams at that bitch! xD hehehe!
4/15/2017 c1 Guest
nice story
nice story
11/4/2012 c5 H
Hey great soty. Must update
Hey great soty. Must update
7/31/2012 c5 Guest
Ask Someone you know who is a sailormoonfan to give you some ideas or let them rewrite it.
Ask Someone you know who is a sailormoonfan to give you some ideas or let them rewrite it.
8/15/2010 c5 
3PriestessHelene
That's ok I'll wait. I have my own stories I need to finish as well lol.
3PriestessHeleneThat's ok I'll wait. I have my own stories I need to finish as well lol.
10/7/2007 c4 5anokas2757
omg
poor usagi...darien you'll be in big trouble boy!
so andrew and mina?great couple...
update on
5anokas2757omg
poor usagi...darien you'll be in big trouble boy!
so andrew and mina?great couple...
update on
10/6/2007 c3 3PriestessHelene
Ok I have something to say about the language please use it when you want to make a REALLY good point and just want to really shock the reader. Cursing to fill in a gap of writing after a while becomes very, very boring.
Now some of the punctuation needs work but otherwise I like how the way you have the story come out about the starlights. For Sere's family to find out who she was ok father doesn't like Darien what father wouldn't like their future son-in-law. Now will you just stop there at people finding out or will you bring in the scouts important people like family in spurts?
I will add this to my alert list to see how this develops.^-^
3PriestessHeleneOk I have something to say about the language please use it when you want to make a REALLY good point and just want to really shock the reader. Cursing to fill in a gap of writing after a while becomes very, very boring.
Now some of the punctuation needs work but otherwise I like how the way you have the story come out about the starlights. For Sere's family to find out who she was ok father doesn't like Darien what father wouldn't like their future son-in-law. Now will you just stop there at people finding out or will you bring in the scouts important people like family in spurts?
I will add this to my alert list to see how this develops.^-^
10/6/2007 c3 7Joyce.mamoru
please continous it is verry good. please I need to see what comes later. please...
7Joyce.mamoruplease continous it is verry good. please I need to see what comes later. please...
10/6/2007 c1 3Usako4life
Hi I haven't read your story
I don't think people write and post stories on any website for just themselves.
They hope someone likes it.
Summaries are the clinger to whether or not someone actually clicks on your story.
Saying bite me, you don't care.. will not get you anywhere.
Im just pissed people post stories up now a days and don't even give a damn. That is why is clogged wth so much garbage.
ugh
change the attitude
k thanks
belle
3Usako4lifeHi I haven't read your story
I don't think people write and post stories on any website for just themselves.
They hope someone likes it.
Summaries are the clinger to whether or not someone actually clicks on your story.
Saying bite me, you don't care.. will not get you anywhere.
Im just pissed people post stories up now a days and don't even give a damn. That is why is clogged wth so much garbage.
ugh
change the attitude
k thanks
belle