for The Life of Kaname and Yuki Together Forever!8/5/2008 c1 
32Riri R
Kaname seems very weak...no, sort of desperate in this chapter. It's in a pathetic way though.
32Riri RKaname seems very weak...no, sort of desperate in this chapter. It's in a pathetic way though.
5/12/2008 c3 5Hotgirlow
hey i can't wait till you update this story it's funny and i can't wait for yuki to become kaname's queen and in the manga he is her adopted brother and they were engaged just thought i'd let you know l8r peace. XO
5Hotgirlowhey i can't wait till you update this story it's funny and i can't wait for yuki to become kaname's queen and in the manga he is her adopted brother and they were engaged just thought i'd let you know l8r peace. XO
1/13/2008 c3 Jojo
that was great
keep going
that was great
keep going
12/1/2007 c3 purebloodlove4ever95
this story is good!i like the part when kaname bit yuki.when will you update?
this story is good!i like the part when kaname bit yuki.when will you update?
11/2/2007 c3 cc
Aw, it is so cute! I like the way you write. It is good. : )
Can't wait to read more of it.
Aw, it is so cute! I like the way you write. It is good. : )
Can't wait to read more of it.
10/26/2007 c3 3Silent Sinner Abella
Hey! My gosh you've improved a lot! And yah! You've update! Keep goin! Im supporting you all the way! Can't wait for the next chappy! *^w^*
3Silent Sinner AbellaHey! My gosh you've improved a lot! And yah! You've update! Keep goin! Im supporting you all the way! Can't wait for the next chappy! *^w^*
10/25/2007 c3 15Lady Ayami
Very interesting. There are a few things that you need to improve on,but yes, so far you have improved greatly. The rest is not that important because I'm sure that most people can unserstand that. I like the story and other people do to!
Lady Ayami
15Lady AyamiVery interesting. There are a few things that you need to improve on,but yes, so far you have improved greatly. The rest is not that important because I'm sure that most people can unserstand that. I like the story and other people do to!
Lady Ayami
10/25/2007 c3 Earthbound Angel A.K.A. KD
I love it so much i'll give you a kind reveiw. You can spell. (unlike most people in this place)and you have a good plot line. i have something for you to think about though. what if you brought new enemy into your situation, not a student, just maybe some human loving person or something like that. she needs to ask for REAL blood at least one (twice would be better) Zero should put up more of a fight(he wouldn't give in that easily). perhaps they would be scolded (not too good of an idea so far but i'm sure *with your creative mind* you can come up with something). ((P.S. i have SUCH a great e-mail right? *sarcasm if you didn't catch it*))
I love it so much i'll give you a kind reveiw. You can spell. (unlike most people in this place)and you have a good plot line. i have something for you to think about though. what if you brought new enemy into your situation, not a student, just maybe some human loving person or something like that. she needs to ask for REAL blood at least one (twice would be better) Zero should put up more of a fight(he wouldn't give in that easily). perhaps they would be scolded (not too good of an idea so far but i'm sure *with your creative mind* you can come up with something). ((P.S. i have SUCH a great e-mail right? *sarcasm if you didn't catch it*))