for Alternate Endings10/18/2007 c2 ColorOfAngels
o.O i love this idea of alternate endings for all the episodes... something to look forward to every week :D
o.O i love this idea of alternate endings for all the episodes... something to look forward to every week :D
10/17/2007 c2 
1SilvaK
I loved every minute of this one...It was really well written,the description,the dialogue,everything...I'd like to see what would happen when House decided to "try to get what he needs"...Pitty that every chapter is a one-shot...Anyway,looking forward to the next one...Bye for now...
1SilvaKI loved every minute of this one...It was really well written,the description,the dialogue,everything...I'd like to see what would happen when House decided to "try to get what he needs"...Pitty that every chapter is a one-shot...Anyway,looking forward to the next one...Bye for now...
10/17/2007 c2 5urbanmonkey
Well, these would probably make so much more sense if I had actually seen these episodes. But it's not your writing that's confusing.
You do write very well. I liked this one a lot. I was a little sad that they didn't actually kiss, but I sometimes, it's best that way. Continue please! I like!
5urbanmonkeyWell, these would probably make so much more sense if I had actually seen these episodes. But it's not your writing that's confusing.
You do write very well. I liked this one a lot. I was a little sad that they didn't actually kiss, but I sometimes, it's best that way. Continue please! I like!
10/16/2007 c1 litlen
very nicely written, i liked the pace and would like to see some more to this especially chase getting kicked to the curb. We are all relying on you writers now that the show is intent on ruining the best pair on the box! keep it up - well done.
very nicely written, i liked the pace and would like to see some more to this especially chase getting kicked to the curb. We are all relying on you writers now that the show is intent on ruining the best pair on the box! keep it up - well done.
10/10/2007 c1 Limaccia
Wow, that was great! Loved the way you explained their actions, step-by-step, so, so, slowly. And this is your first House story? You definitely should write some more - Hameron, that is.
I liked it so much, and since you said you were too drained to do it, I cut & pasted it, and corrected the grammar & misspellings, so I could enjoy it even more. (Unfortunately, since most of my work is writing [non-fiction], mistakes just stop me in my tracks, and take me out of the moment. I wish they didn't.)
Wow, that was great! Loved the way you explained their actions, step-by-step, so, so, slowly. And this is your first House story? You definitely should write some more - Hameron, that is.
I liked it so much, and since you said you were too drained to do it, I cut & pasted it, and corrected the grammar & misspellings, so I could enjoy it even more. (Unfortunately, since most of my work is writing [non-fiction], mistakes just stop me in my tracks, and take me out of the moment. I wish they didn't.)
10/7/2007 c1 14yiska93
Really liked how you started it off. I know what you mean, hiding fanfiction can be a real pain.
Can't wait for some more,
Jess
14yiska93Really liked how you started it off. I know what you mean, hiding fanfiction can be a real pain.
Can't wait for some more,
Jess
10/7/2007 c1 giac21
I love this story!
I wish this wasn't just a oneshot!
i'd love to know what happens next
i love your writing
can't wait to read more of your stories
I love this story!
I wish this wasn't just a oneshot!
i'd love to know what happens next
i love your writing
can't wait to read more of your stories
10/7/2007 c1 Alisoba
ok.. now tell me that you are one of the writers of the show in disguise and that this one is gonna be the first scene of episode 04_03 please!
ok.. now tell me that you are one of the writers of the show in disguise and that this one is gonna be the first scene of episode 04_03 please!
10/7/2007 c1 5urbanmonkey
Not in Canada, but thought I'd be the first to review. This is SO good! Please, don't tell me this is a one shot cause I'm dying for more! Please please let there be more chapters! I like this a lot! You have a great sense for writing imagery and it works. Please continue!
5urbanmonkeyNot in Canada, but thought I'd be the first to review. This is SO good! Please, don't tell me this is a one shot cause I'm dying for more! Please please let there be more chapters! I like this a lot! You have a great sense for writing imagery and it works. Please continue!