for Please Protect Them8/31/2023 c1 
3koitheclikkie21
Hi I just wanted to review as my only way to comment, but I would like to join the community. My story was only posted 18 hours ago and was shamed by one of the people there. I really don't like it and want to say how awesome you are to fight back against haters and shamers! Keep being you, you are AMAZING
3koitheclikkie21Hi I just wanted to review as my only way to comment, but I would like to join the community. My story was only posted 18 hours ago and was shamed by one of the people there. I really don't like it and want to say how awesome you are to fight back against haters and shamers! Keep being you, you are AMAZING
3/29/2021 c1 Guest
Hey hello I wanted to tell you that someone broke rule 1 a person by the name freedzoneruin I try to tell the rest of the CU but they keep ignore me for some reason. Please look up this account and you see how this person is breaking the rules.
Hey hello I wanted to tell you that someone broke rule 1 a person by the name freedzoneruin I try to tell the rest of the CU but they keep ignore me for some reason. Please look up this account and you see how this person is breaking the rules.
1/28/2017 c1 Anonymous
I hardly see why people wish to report this, it is not a non story, and not a list. Carry on
I hardly see why people wish to report this, it is not a non story, and not a list. Carry on
6/28/2013 c1 12NarwhaleNapper
This is pretty touching. Normally, I'm not fond of short stories, but this is an exception. I like how you describe the brother's as two entities.
Some of the wordings were a bit awkward, but it didn't hinder the tone of the reading. I liked this alot! Great job, and thank you for sharing this.
12NarwhaleNapperThis is pretty touching. Normally, I'm not fond of short stories, but this is an exception. I like how you describe the brother's as two entities.
Some of the wordings were a bit awkward, but it didn't hinder the tone of the reading. I liked this alot! Great job, and thank you for sharing this.
2/23/2011 c1 ghostwood77
This was very touching to read; it really seemed to catch a concerned mother's love. Good job.
This was very touching to read; it really seemed to catch a concerned mother's love. Good job.
10/14/2007 c1 110windwhisprer
It's rather cute. I love how you had it so Seiten and Goku were two seperate entities; "brothers." That was really well done. However there were some spelling mistakes and gramaticfal errors that took away from the story. they were kind of distracting. If you could, it would be good to correct them.
Otherwise, ti was really sweet. I liked it.
-Windy
110windwhisprerIt's rather cute. I love how you had it so Seiten and Goku were two seperate entities; "brothers." That was really well done. However there were some spelling mistakes and gramaticfal errors that took away from the story. they were kind of distracting. If you could, it would be good to correct them.
Otherwise, ti was really sweet. I liked it.
-Windy
10/8/2007 c1 68ry0kiku
It's so sad... demo, I love it! The way Mother Nature describes Goku and his 'brother' Seiten... By the way, is Seiten Taisei really Goku's brother? And more, why you describe as if Sanzo and Gojyo are bad guys? Anyway, I love your story, keep on going! And next time, try to make some extra long stories with more chapters, okay? I'll be waiting!
68ry0kikuIt's so sad... demo, I love it! The way Mother Nature describes Goku and his 'brother' Seiten... By the way, is Seiten Taisei really Goku's brother? And more, why you describe as if Sanzo and Gojyo are bad guys? Anyway, I love your story, keep on going! And next time, try to make some extra long stories with more chapters, okay? I'll be waiting!