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8/6/2008 c2 Wraith the Destroyer
Poor Vexen...Great Story!
4/20/2008 c2 4Different Realm
Axel afraid of bunnies? Be afraid, Axel, be very afraid. It was funny though, and I would defiantly laugh if you found a way to make Demyx Hydrophobic. Or snakes, snakes are alot easier.
11/19/2007 c1 Shadow230
It's great, but you need to work on your sentences flowing together more. There are some places where it just sems like random information-Things that arent neccisary.

Other than that your spelling is great and you have no grammar flaws that I could catch.

Good Work!
11/18/2007 c2 Shadow230
*shiftily eyes*

I am the review ninja.

*throws smoke bomb**smoke evaporates*

Gotta go!

*runs away*
10/20/2007 c1 11Nari Crow
Ha, amazing! From this moment on, this is how I will imagine Axel got his fear of rabbits! Genius.

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