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2Jack Inqu
Heh, poor Alicia.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
2Jack InquHeh, poor Alicia.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
5/9 c33 3RonaldM40196867
Demona needs experience having sex in her human form.
Lexington deserves his own series.
I’m sure Alicia enjoyed watching Dominique transform.
Fiona Canmore is fun.
3RonaldM40196867Demona needs experience having sex in her human form.
Lexington deserves his own series.
I’m sure Alicia enjoyed watching Dominique transform.
Fiona Canmore is fun.
1/27 c32 2Jack Inqu
Yeah, Dominique has a lot of little oddities that add up, especially if you're someone close to her.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
2Jack InquYeah, Dominique has a lot of little oddities that add up, especially if you're someone close to her.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
1/26 c32 3RonaldM40196867
Macbeth is so old-fashioned, it’s adorable.
Now Fox knows Alicia and Demona are dating.
3RonaldM40196867Macbeth is so old-fashioned, it’s adorable.
Now Fox knows Alicia and Demona are dating.
9/29/2022 c31 Ltlconf
You've got Destine as Dustine a few times, but otherwise a great chapter. Great call on using the Pack: Hyena taking out a first class hitter so cleanly and quickly was a great way to show her skill and show the Pack in general as a real threat. Plus it was a cool scene, period!
You've got Destine as Dustine a few times, but otherwise a great chapter. Great call on using the Pack: Hyena taking out a first class hitter so cleanly and quickly was a great way to show her skill and show the Pack in general as a real threat. Plus it was a cool scene, period!
9/29/2022 c31 2Jack Inqu
Nice reminder that the Pack are killers.
Aww, they both miss each other.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
2Jack InquNice reminder that the Pack are killers.
Aww, they both miss each other.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
9/29/2022 c31 Fanrei
Thank you for the chapter. I'm glad this fic is still alive.
Thank you for the chapter. I'm glad this fic is still alive.
6/23/2022 c30 Mugen-Muse
Indeed. Cops like knowing the "why" when someone is trying to hide something.
Well, Alicia does make a good point.
Indeed. Cops like knowing the "why" when someone is trying to hide something.
Well, Alicia does make a good point.
6/22/2022 c30 Blackholelord
How Alicia figuring out how Dominique is Demona. There are ways, one general plot idea is for Alicia to be kidnapped by enemies of Demona or her human ego, Dominique (or kidnapped for ransom money from Dominique as it becomes clear that Alicia is her lover, and there will always thugs looking for easy money). Demona is developing feelings for Alicia, and the idea of her mate/girlfriend being kidnapped would send her flying for the rescue. It needs be timed or a least dragged to the point, that Alicia witness Demona's transformation back into Dominique. Basically, lose track of time, and the transformation hits without warning (Demona will be focus on saving Alicia so much, she will not be focus on anything else).
How Alicia figuring out how Dominique is Demona. There are ways, one general plot idea is for Alicia to be kidnapped by enemies of Demona or her human ego, Dominique (or kidnapped for ransom money from Dominique as it becomes clear that Alicia is her lover, and there will always thugs looking for easy money). Demona is developing feelings for Alicia, and the idea of her mate/girlfriend being kidnapped would send her flying for the rescue. It needs be timed or a least dragged to the point, that Alicia witness Demona's transformation back into Dominique. Basically, lose track of time, and the transformation hits without warning (Demona will be focus on saving Alicia so much, she will not be focus on anything else).