11/7/2007 c7 TemperTemper
Wah! That's the sound of me crying like a baby that you have left it there! More soon, please! How unbecoming of me to beg I know... so, I loved this chapter - the switches in POV worked really well - I can see why your were inspired by that story it's great isn't it? Look forward to more!
Wah! That's the sound of me crying like a baby that you have left it there! More soon, please! How unbecoming of me to beg I know... so, I loved this chapter - the switches in POV worked really well - I can see why your were inspired by that story it's great isn't it? Look forward to more!
11/7/2007 c1 mumrulz
Ok ...after reading "Dirt Little Secrets" - which I absolutely loved - I have found this story.
And after just one chapter I am loving this one too. The humour in this chapter alone is enough to make me want to read on, but now knowing that not only has Angela been trying to get Booth & Brennan together, but now she has enlisted a friend & her fiance.(very sneaky :-)).
Booth & Brennan won't know what hit them. LOL,
Just a couple of examples of my favourite lines:
*Booth prayed for an interruption; A ringing phone or fellow agent bringing news would do the trick. A natural disaster would be alright too. Maybe an earthquake or flood or a fire in the building—anything to get him out of this conversation. After waiting a few seconds, he had to accept that he wasn’t going to receive any divine assistance"
*After several minutes of internal deliberation, Booth had his decision. He decided that he would decide later.
I have some catching up to do so I will continue on. If the following chapters are as good as the first I will be a very happy reader & reviewer. LOL.
Ok ...after reading "Dirt Little Secrets" - which I absolutely loved - I have found this story.
And after just one chapter I am loving this one too. The humour in this chapter alone is enough to make me want to read on, but now knowing that not only has Angela been trying to get Booth & Brennan together, but now she has enlisted a friend & her fiance.(very sneaky :-)).
Booth & Brennan won't know what hit them. LOL,
Just a couple of examples of my favourite lines:
*Booth prayed for an interruption; A ringing phone or fellow agent bringing news would do the trick. A natural disaster would be alright too. Maybe an earthquake or flood or a fire in the building—anything to get him out of this conversation. After waiting a few seconds, he had to accept that he wasn’t going to receive any divine assistance"
*After several minutes of internal deliberation, Booth had his decision. He decided that he would decide later.
I have some catching up to do so I will continue on. If the following chapters are as good as the first I will be a very happy reader & reviewer. LOL.
11/6/2007 c7 10mag31
BOOTH! BOOTH! BOOTH! *encourages him too*
Oh! He's such a gentleman, asking her permission!
"Several seconds later, he stopped to see if she was going to slap him. She didn’t." LMAO!
“Why then? Were you having digestive difficulties?” LOL Brennan, always so romantic!
*screams, hysterical* Perfect end! Aw I can't wait for next chapter now! Good job sweetie, update as soon as you can!
BOOTH! BOOTH! BOOTH! *encourages him too*
Oh! He's such a gentleman, asking her permission!
"Several seconds later, he stopped to see if she was going to slap him. She didn’t." LMAO!
“Why then? Were you having digestive difficulties?” LOL Brennan, always so romantic!
*screams, hysterical* Perfect end! Aw I can't wait for next chapter now! Good job sweetie, update as soon as you can!
11/6/2007 c7 free-radigal
whoa! that was a big step. love the story. where are you going to go with it? perhaps brennan gets scared and runs? but they hafta end up together eventually ;) well its upto you. update soon!
whoa! that was a big step. love the story. where are you going to go with it? perhaps brennan gets scared and runs? but they hafta end up together eventually ;) well its upto you. update soon!
11/6/2007 c7 9FluffyZGiggler
keep it coming, and I won't send you threatening messages. or maybe I will. just because I could. and because I don't want her to freak out. this is threatening message #1.
keep it coming, and I won't send you threatening messages. or maybe I will. just because I could. and because I don't want her to freak out. this is threatening message #1.
11/6/2007 c7 2Nokkiyo
Wow... I think you stunned me into silence from that amazing chapter! Loved it loved it loved it!Especially the slipt POV's, which added a nice new dimension to the chapter. And what a great ending- witty, cute, and sweet! Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Wow... I think you stunned me into silence from that amazing chapter! Loved it loved it loved it!Especially the slipt POV's, which added a nice new dimension to the chapter. And what a great ending- witty, cute, and sweet! Thanks for another lovely chapter.
11/6/2007 c7 1future mrs. jim halpert
WOW! That was an amazing chapter. It was so awkward and funny. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update it soon.
WOW! That was an amazing chapter. It was so awkward and funny. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update it soon.
11/6/2007 c7 Nikki
Wow. I just found the show and so I looked up some stories. I've loved them both. And what a way to end this chapter. Please say there's more coming! Excellent writing.
Wow. I just found the show and so I looked up some stories. I've loved them both. And what a way to end this chapter. Please say there's more coming! Excellent writing.
11/6/2007 c7 squintsquad03
Mental cheering starts now. I really liked the perspective shifts and their thoughts. The Catholic part of Booth's brain must have been quite irritating. :)
Mental cheering starts now. I really liked the perspective shifts and their thoughts. The Catholic part of Booth's brain must have been quite irritating. :)
11/6/2007 c7 Lifeguard
*Squeals!* Yay for Booth telling her what he feels! This chapter was hot and fun and a pleasure to read! More! More! More! Please!
*Squeals!* Yay for Booth telling her what he feels! This chapter was hot and fun and a pleasure to read! More! More! More! Please!
11/6/2007 c7 beverleymitchellrocks47
great update I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter by the way When You Say Nothing At All is one of my all time favorite songs in fact when I saw Beverley Mitchell in concert she had me sing it with her it was amazing and you mentioning that song reminded me of that and the whole story is so great and I look foward to the next chapter.
great update I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter by the way When You Say Nothing At All is one of my all time favorite songs in fact when I saw Beverley Mitchell in concert she had me sing it with her it was amazing and you mentioning that song reminded me of that and the whole story is so great and I look foward to the next chapter.
11/6/2007 c7 6GGjunkie33
Ah! Okay, great chapter!
First of all, I loved the internal dialogue stuff- very funny! I liked how you changed point of views between Brennan and Booth throughout the story, and I can't wait to see how you have Brennan react (I think we need a huge "Aw" after Booth's last line) : )
Ah! Okay, great chapter!
First of all, I loved the internal dialogue stuff- very funny! I liked how you changed point of views between Brennan and Booth throughout the story, and I can't wait to see how you have Brennan react (I think we need a huge "Aw" after Booth's last line) : )