4/15/2008 c8 3yorkiegirl159
give booth a test drive!
angie! booth isn't a car!
yes, but you still want to ride him...
oh, very cute. thanks for writing, loved this story!
give booth a test drive!
angie! booth isn't a car!
yes, but you still want to ride him...
oh, very cute. thanks for writing, loved this story!
4/15/2008 c4 yorkiegirl159
“She’s always-” He stopped himself just in time.
She's always sexy... aahhahah that was really funny.
this could totally be an epi! great job, can't wait to finish it!
“She’s always-” He stopped himself just in time.
She's always sexy... aahhahah that was really funny.
this could totally be an epi! great job, can't wait to finish it!
2/22/2008 c8 6CupCakeConundrum
That was great. The reception was the best one ever, and i've actully been to three. :) I'm went red from laughter and embarressment for them.
Hope the next one is as good.
keep on typing
* hannah *
That was great. The reception was the best one ever, and i've actully been to three. :) I'm went red from laughter and embarressment for them.
Hope the next one is as good.
keep on typing
* hannah *
2/5/2008 c1 38ThinksInWords
Okay, sort of reviewing this as I read. Writing down favorite lines and all that. Love your writing.
"Jealousy, thy name is Booth." Hehe, great line.
"A natural disaster would be alright too." Denial, thy name is Booth. Fantabulously awkward.
Oh... Conspiracy, very Hodgins. Angela is so obvious. But then again, so is the Kathy/Bones & Andy/Booth thing... *grin*
"surrounded once again by normal people"... Very Booth
"Oh, it must be new"... Booth is so obvious. What stop sign?
"I'm not going to think about him right now." If she has to tell herself that... Oh, well.
Booth is going to the special hell (Darn it, Firefly reference). X-rated thoughts in church.
"Gee, I wonder who I would pick." That was fantastic!
Still fanning myself over the garter scene. It was both subtle and kinda hot. Is that wrong? Booth doesn't seem to think so *wink*
The Hallelujah Chorus line was fabulous. I have moments like that all the time. Everyone thinks I'm strange.
"Squints gone wild". Who knows, it could be the next hit show.
"But you'd like to ride him." Typical Angela. Reminds me of the line she had on the show, something like "If I were you, I'd buy a ticket for that ride." Great, great line.
"You arranged another conspiracy and didn't tell me?" Oh, Hodgins and his conspiracy theories.
Loved the story. Really well-written.
Okay, sort of reviewing this as I read. Writing down favorite lines and all that. Love your writing.
"Jealousy, thy name is Booth." Hehe, great line.
"A natural disaster would be alright too." Denial, thy name is Booth. Fantabulously awkward.
Oh... Conspiracy, very Hodgins. Angela is so obvious. But then again, so is the Kathy/Bones & Andy/Booth thing... *grin*
"surrounded once again by normal people"... Very Booth
"Oh, it must be new"... Booth is so obvious. What stop sign?
"I'm not going to think about him right now." If she has to tell herself that... Oh, well.
Booth is going to the special hell (Darn it, Firefly reference). X-rated thoughts in church.
"Gee, I wonder who I would pick." That was fantastic!
Still fanning myself over the garter scene. It was both subtle and kinda hot. Is that wrong? Booth doesn't seem to think so *wink*
The Hallelujah Chorus line was fabulous. I have moments like that all the time. Everyone thinks I'm strange.
"Squints gone wild". Who knows, it could be the next hit show.
"But you'd like to ride him." Typical Angela. Reminds me of the line she had on the show, something like "If I were you, I'd buy a ticket for that ride." Great, great line.
"You arranged another conspiracy and didn't tell me?" Oh, Hodgins and his conspiracy theories.
Loved the story. Really well-written.
1/19/2008 c7 13Downwind-Sailor
Haha, I love the idea of Bones going into the men's room, it's very her:)
Haha, I love the idea of Bones going into the men's room, it's very her:)
1/19/2008 c8 14heatherberry
Lovely jubbly! You really have a knack for humour! Thanks for sharing.
The "scenarios" had me really laughing, plus:
Hodgins smiled. “We both know Dr. Brennan isn’t most women. Congratulations for finally saying it.” He couldn’t help adding: “It took you long enough.”
Booth fought the urge to reach for his gun
Lovely jubbly! You really have a knack for humour! Thanks for sharing.
The "scenarios" had me really laughing, plus:
Hodgins smiled. “We both know Dr. Brennan isn’t most women. Congratulations for finally saying it.” He couldn’t help adding: “It took you long enough.”
Booth fought the urge to reach for his gun
1/19/2008 c6 heatherberry
Rockin'! I loved the little twist at the end with Charlie passing the garter on - inspired!
Rockin'! I loved the little twist at the end with Charlie passing the garter on - inspired!
1/19/2008 c1 heatherberry
“Booth, as your friend, there’s something I should tell you. I’m worried, though, that you might shoot the messenger.”
“Why would I do that?”
“Well, there was the time you shot a clown speaker on an ice cream truck.”
LOL - awesome...really looking forward to the rest of this - off to chapter 2!
“Booth, as your friend, there’s something I should tell you. I’m worried, though, that you might shoot the messenger.”
“Why would I do that?”
“Well, there was the time you shot a clown speaker on an ice cream truck.”
LOL - awesome...really looking forward to the rest of this - off to chapter 2!
1/9/2008 c2 Polly83
I was curious to know what the problem with the book was... but probably it wasn't all that important...
The most important thing was going on with stage two I guess...
I was curious to know what the problem with the book was... but probably it wasn't all that important...
The most important thing was going on with stage two I guess...
1/9/2008 c1 Polly83
So there was Angela behind all this, uh? I had to know...
This Ryan guy seems nice anyway, I don't mind reading of him again.
Uh, and, btw, it was funny to read too.
So there was Angela behind all this, uh? I had to know...
This Ryan guy seems nice anyway, I don't mind reading of him again.
Uh, and, btw, it was funny to read too.
1/8/2008 c5 106rubycaspar
I'm loving the story so far, and will keep reading in a mo, but I just wanted to say that I completely understand why Brennan would want to laugh at that reading...
My parents renewed their wedding vows a couple of years ago and I had to read that same passage out. I had barely finished the first line before I burst out laughing, and then the whole congregation (except the priest :S) started laughing as well, so I couldn't stop.
It was so embarrassing. Luckily my parents found it funny as well... :P
Ok, gonna keep reading now!
I'm loving the story so far, and will keep reading in a mo, but I just wanted to say that I completely understand why Brennan would want to laugh at that reading...
My parents renewed their wedding vows a couple of years ago and I had to read that same passage out. I had barely finished the first line before I burst out laughing, and then the whole congregation (except the priest :S) started laughing as well, so I couldn't stop.
It was so embarrassing. Luckily my parents found it funny as well... :P
Ok, gonna keep reading now!
12/22/2007 c8 10VampirateLycan
I liked it. It was quite good. I've never heard of them wedding traditions before. Are they done by country or something?
I liked it. It was quite good. I've never heard of them wedding traditions before. Are they done by country or something?