for After The Abduction12/9/2018 c27 guest
Great story, is it completed?
Great story, is it completed?
9/5/2017 c2 
11116788
Hey, just wanted to tell you that the first five chapters don't have any paragraphs. Everything is bunched into one, which makes it very difficult to read. It could be cause you've been editing in a document outside ff and then copy pasted everything into ff... Just thought I'd let ya know. The story is perfect btw!
11116788Hey, just wanted to tell you that the first five chapters don't have any paragraphs. Everything is bunched into one, which makes it very difficult to read. It could be cause you've been editing in a document outside ff and then copy pasted everything into ff... Just thought I'd let ya know. The story is perfect btw!
2/21/2015 c27 LynneBailey
Wow this was such an awesome story...I loved it very much. Thanks for sharing.
Wow this was such an awesome story...I loved it very much. Thanks for sharing.
7/17/2014 c1 Candace
I believe this will be a great Story the only problem with it is there's a lot of missing or misplaced words all threw it. If all of this is corrected it would be more enjoyable to read!
I believe this will be a great Story the only problem with it is there's a lot of missing or misplaced words all threw it. If all of this is corrected it would be more enjoyable to read!
9/27/2013 c27 AngelDKWitch
OMG good writing :)
Love it, where did you come up with Molly?
OMG good writing :)
Love it, where did you come up with Molly?
9/27/2013 c6 AngelDKWitch
U got to be kiddin' me! 27 chapters! Come on...
It's allready exsiting
U got to be kiddin' me! 27 chapters! Come on...
It's allready exsiting
6/30/2013 c27 Guest
Wow what a great chapter! Please continue this story. Looking forward to reading more great talented writing.
Wow what a great chapter! Please continue this story. Looking forward to reading more great talented writing.
2/6/2013 c26 Kayleernea
A really great story,keep up the good wrting.
Thanks
Julie.
A really great story,keep up the good wrting.
Thanks
Julie.
11/2/2009 c1 shilosha
Totally unreadable with missing or musused pronunciation, mixed tenses, and missiong words, i.e. Sully can hear the "dog" where I am sure you meant "dog soldiers." You sure this wasn't a first, rough draft and then you got too lazy to copy edit and proofread, so you just posted it? I couldn't even get thru more than half a dozen paragraphs in this chapter, and a random glance at a few others tell me they are the same.
Totally unreadable with missing or musused pronunciation, mixed tenses, and missiong words, i.e. Sully can hear the "dog" where I am sure you meant "dog soldiers." You sure this wasn't a first, rough draft and then you got too lazy to copy edit and proofread, so you just posted it? I couldn't even get thru more than half a dozen paragraphs in this chapter, and a random glance at a few others tell me they are the same.
6/7/2009 c26 19kruemi
Huzzah for Michaela remembering! And thank you so much for continuing this story!
19kruemiHuzzah for Michaela remembering! And thank you so much for continuing this story!
5/26/2008 c25 13Rachel Selina
Great addition, but something tells me that the next thing she remembers won't be quite so wonderful.
Sully is so sweet that you just want to wrap him up and take him home with you.
13Rachel SelinaGreat addition, but something tells me that the next thing she remembers won't be quite so wonderful.
Sully is so sweet that you just want to wrap him up and take him home with you.