for Family First12/18/2020 c3 Zara Bennle
It sounds choppy, but I like the plot, will it turn out like Sound of Music?
It sounds choppy, but I like the plot, will it turn out like Sound of Music?
12/8/2017 c32 Olivia
This is one of my fav fanfics. You ended it perfectly. Usually people just end them but you ended it properly.
This is one of my fav fanfics. You ended it perfectly. Usually people just end them but you ended it properly.
12/8/2017 c31 Olivia
I was the same age Bryson was when my younger brother was born, Thomas
I was the same age Bryson was when my younger brother was born, Thomas
11/7/2016 c32 DK87
I loved this story and despite the many spelling errors I had a pretty easy time reading it and I give you my compliments. I would advice you to find a beta or maybe just someone to help look over your work.
I offer my service should you ever need it.
Once again great story and I loved your little Bryson.
I loved this story and despite the many spelling errors I had a pretty easy time reading it and I give you my compliments. I would advice you to find a beta or maybe just someone to help look over your work.
I offer my service should you ever need it.
Once again great story and I loved your little Bryson.
711/22/2014 c31 twlightbella
Alexandra Marie Malfoy is born Bryson's little sister and draco and Ginny's daughter
Alexandra Marie Malfoy is born Bryson's little sister and draco and Ginny's daughter
11/18/2012 c32 Manon
It is a really beautifl story that very much touched my heart and I just love the portrayal of Ginny. There are however slight mistakes here an there that would have to be corrected to make it perfect.
It is a really beautifl story that very much touched my heart and I just love the portrayal of Ginny. There are however slight mistakes here an there that would have to be corrected to make it perfect.
11/12/2012 c32 Guest
Aww
Aww
8/27/2012 c5 JaneA0202
hmm, it nice but I find everything too much cute and sugary...also sometimes rushed...
hmm, it nice but I find everything too much cute and sugary...also sometimes rushed...
8/27/2012 c1 JaneA0202
the plot sounds interesting, the length of the chapter is great, writing style too...but Ginny as a Governess? not that it's bad, but I feel that Ginny could do much better...also that scene between Draco and Ginny was a bit OOC, but I guess they both matured...and I know this sounds silly, but I would prefer If Draco didn't really love his wife, for some reason it makes me uncomfortable...
the plot sounds interesting, the length of the chapter is great, writing style too...but Ginny as a Governess? not that it's bad, but I feel that Ginny could do much better...also that scene between Draco and Ginny was a bit OOC, but I guess they both matured...and I know this sounds silly, but I would prefer If Draco didn't really love his wife, for some reason it makes me uncomfortable...