for Toxic10/10/2009 c18 Monafekri
T.T why do all awesome stories always have to be incomplete, anywho great story please update as soon as you can :D
T.T why do all awesome stories always have to be incomplete, anywho great story please update as soon as you can :D
8/13/2008 c18 
1persiaaaaaaaa
omg i can't believe this i put this story on alert cince or before chapter 13 and i didn't get the alerts
but god the last 5 chapters i just read were awesome
a couple of questions though
hawkeye and black hayate you must be a fma fan right?
and marie how come it's an english name?
i'm not sure about risa though
anyway i wish you luck in writing those 3 chapters through memory i've done that once i swear pain. in. in. the. ass.
1persiaaaaaaaaomg i can't believe this i put this story on alert cince or before chapter 13 and i didn't get the alerts
but god the last 5 chapters i just read were awesome
a couple of questions though
hawkeye and black hayate you must be a fma fan right?
and marie how come it's an english name?
i'm not sure about risa though
anyway i wish you luck in writing those 3 chapters through memory i've done that once i swear pain. in. in. the. ass.
4/10/2008 c18 40rallybabe89
omg. so naruto's dad was a mini slut. jk. its hard to be in love and then be responsible to family at the same time
40rallybabe89omg. so naruto's dad was a mini slut. jk. its hard to be in love and then be responsible to family at the same time
4/10/2008 c18 12TomatoBisque
Ah well, the great thing about getting things deleted and having to re write is that you have a lot of room to improve ^-^ It's happened to me quite a few times, and every time I was forced into re-writing, the chapter turned out better than the original :P. Good chapter, this one was, Naruto's antics are always amusing :D
12TomatoBisqueAh well, the great thing about getting things deleted and having to re write is that you have a lot of room to improve ^-^ It's happened to me quite a few times, and every time I was forced into re-writing, the chapter turned out better than the original :P. Good chapter, this one was, Naruto's antics are always amusing :D
4/4/2008 c17 XoXoDarkBlossomFantasyyLvrXoXo
OMG OMG OMG OMG! So are they like still alive or something? AWESOME! I can not wait until sakura and sasuke have kids! LOL! Random i know! Next chappy please!^_^
OMG OMG OMG OMG! So are they like still alive or something? AWESOME! I can not wait until sakura and sasuke have kids! LOL! Random i know! Next chappy please!^_^
4/1/2008 c17 TomatoBisque
I SENT IT T_T I SENT IT I SENT IT T_T
I think we just have bad internet luck, but I feel like an ass T_T
-dies-
T_T I'm sorry, -resends-
I SENT IT T_T I SENT IT I SENT IT T_T
I think we just have bad internet luck, but I feel like an ass T_T
-dies-
T_T I'm sorry, -resends-
3/30/2008 c17 40rallybabe89
wow.everyone sakura knows is related to naruto pity how sasuke only just met her.
40rallybabe89wow.everyone sakura knows is related to naruto pity how sasuke only just met her.
2/18/2008 c16 XoXoDarkBlossomFantasyyLvrXoXo
OSM! i luv your story! I can't wait to see what happens next! please put up new chappy! ^_^
OSM! i luv your story! I can't wait to see what happens next! please put up new chappy! ^_^