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3/31/2011 c1 17lovelylittleflowerchild
I really like this. The time keeping element gives it a littls something extra. Good job! :3
4/7/2010 c1 10CrazyCatie
LOVE THAT TO DEATH! and how special to be the first ever ATU story published!
4/30/2008 c1 Bookish0278
THIS IS REALLY GOOD! I like the numbers, and it makes it seem- more emotional, and Lucy seems more feeling. This is good!
1/14/2008 c1 22they're only words
Loved it!
12/30/2007 c1 38TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010
Great job. Very well written, and very Lucy.

And I totally identify with her. I do that all the time, counting days.

Mm...that was great.
11/11/2007 c1 11Addicted to Antics
That was wonderful! Great way to work in a great song.
10/28/2007 c1 8Trekkie S. Monster
This is so deep, it actually made me sympathize with Lucy (which I definitely didn't during the movie). I'm having trouble arranging my thoughts, but here you go: Really good story, emotional and powerful. XD
10/27/2007 c1 lady anjanette de fleur
This is really, really good. I love the way you wrote it, and I love how you capture Lucy's conflict and personality.
10/16/2007 c1 8Mrs. James Harold Potter
How purely beautiful! I adored the way you took breaks in between the different parts of her life. I found it interesting the way that she counted down and up to different things, you know? I adore your writing style-actually everything about it.

"1 rooftop away from happiness and the 909 hours since her phone call to Mr. Hubert melt into nothing.

All she needs is love." What a nice way to end the story. Its a reverse perspective, seeing where Lucy's mindset was at the beginning of the story, then back to what it was by the end of it...you know what I mean? You are an extreemly talented writer. Keep up the amaazingly gorgeous work!

XOXO Mrs. James Harold Potter

(PS: I wrote some Lucy/Jude stories as well! And join our Across the Universe Community-we share stories!)
10/15/2007 c1 10ginnyharryxox
amazing. I loved it. :)

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