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1/16/2013 c2 Galem
I can so relate with Ben on the needle phobia. *shivers*
6/18/2011 c1 Takanuva'sProtege
whoa... does lauren sound just like me or is it just me

*glances back at story

dark blond hair - nope mine brown

hazel eyes with extra colors - yup i got that

pale skin - yes again

very vivid imagination - umm... heck yeah!

- i don't like make up dresses or skirts!

ok that's kinda stange but really cool. a character I can relate to, awesome.

more story please!
4/23/2010 c2 2Snowlily246
Update Please!
12/12/2009 c2 InTheLight-Hija
this is really interesting. I like the weredragat, Ben. So are you gonna continue? Pwese? I'm a bighuge fan of Bionicle. Kepp writing!
1/27/2008 c2 16WereWolfPrincess1215
-twitches- That...was...the...most...FREAKIN'LYAWESOMESTORY! You made everyone perfect...Even Aweno...-faints-
1/22/2008 c1 Street Wolf Female
Umi? cute, VERY cute, I love it! ^^ Hey, in the next chapter, are you going to have the two fight, surender, what? Im more eager to know HOW your going to do the next chapter! Well, Im just going to have to wait and find out now am I?

S.W.F, Street Wolf Female

P.S, Can you have...maby a BIT of fluff? Or make the strange Umi...thing turn into a partner for Lauren?

10/27/2007 c1 WereWolfPrincess1215
I don't know why I didn't do this B-4... B-4? I won! BINGO! lol. Anyway, keep it up!
10/22/2007 c1 1dragon of atlantis
I like the first chapter.

it has a good start to it and want to know what

happens next.

keep writing!

looking forward to an update.
10/21/2007 c1 5The-Charcoal-Alchemist
Update! Update! Update!

...please? *puppy-dog eyes*
10/20/2007 c1 Can I have A Cookie Pwease
UMI! UMI! X3! hehehee!

Give me Cookie!
10/14/2007 c1 Zanda Waffle 07
hm...it's the usual kids-get-thrown-into-the-Bionicle-world story... Im not too happy about that, but hopefully this will turn out better than the majority of those eh?

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